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| Maguena 2002-08-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOne of the better stories I've read. I especially enjoyed the questions of morality, and how you _didn't_ resolve them (I hate pat answers). Characterization and tone of story were both just a bit over-the-top, but not badly. perhaps the integration of the science into the story could have been smoother, but you've done a good job there, as well. You have an excellent way of writing cleanly, to the heart of the matter, without extranities. Overall, quite enjoyable. |
| saint 2002-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abusecool story |