I just hope BD is okay after Megatron lets his 'tender mercies' upon him.

I really love both your Knock Out and Breakdown, how you manage to keep them this IC is really beyond me - excellent work!

This here: "You're alive, Breakdown. I'd consider that a 'good night'," Knock Out said dryly, though lacking in his customary sarcasm." is really good, and can serve as an example how you leave things unsaid that every attentive reader will get anyway - I love that subtle style of yours! -

The whole story is great, from B's walk of shame, to his feelings on the matter to both owing Starscream and being abducted by humans and KO's reaction - great job!

More? *puppydogeyes*

Great Story! It sucked me in from the start.