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Reviews For: Conundrum

Arafel 2008-06-29 ch 1,	abuseFor all that I'm a sap for happy endings, I keep coming back to how this is a great story without one. It drives me nuts to keep coming back thinking, "Mhm, yeah, this definitely makes sense," while your tale is going off in the direction opposite to the one I tend to cheer for. That, I must say, makes for a well-crafted fanfic. Nice work!
rgbforever 2007-07-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseExcellent, EXCELLENT writing...I love how you had Egon using the technical lingo, you were very consistent with that...and I love how Peter was so defensive of Janine, as we all know he cares for her...I also love how you incorporated Winston & Ray as the attempted peacemakers...having Ray break down and spill the beans and Winston trying to stay neutral but still having an opinion was very realistic...exactly how I would imagine them to be...I believe that is all how it would go down...(EXCEPT for Egon having sex with Janine out of pity, even he isn't that cold, IMO, but that is just my personal preference)...that aside, I enjoyed it immensely and I think you're writing is SUPERB! Great attention to detail and interpersonal dynamics! Awesome job! Really hope you write more (preferably more E/J positive, but that's just me)
JECrazy 2007-06-13 ch 1,	abuseEgon is so completely out of character in this. For one thing he's not that irresponsible and for another he takes his relationship with Janine very seriously. Janine scares him a little. Sex scares him a little. Sex with Janine terrifies him! He would never ever have sex with her out of pity. He would never ever use her for casual sex. He's old fashioned in the ways of love and frriendship. When he finally decided what he wanted he would either say to Janine that he just wants to be friends (which is highly unlikely) or he'd give her his everything, his mind, heart, soul, spirit and body unconditionally (which is the most likely outcome). That's the way I feel about it and I won't be swayed!
soulfulbee 2007-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was a really good fic, good job at breaking down the man behind the genius. No matter what sooner or later people have to admit there is a need to be intamite with another human being. Not even egon can dodge that bullet.
Anonymous 2005-05-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm not sure Egon would have sex with Janine out of pity. That doesn't sound like him. But Janine on the other hand...
SamuraiPrincess01 2005-05-01 ch 1,	abuseWow. That's what I call intense. Well...Egon's a fool. And I feel sorry for Janine. To love someone with all your heart, but have him not love you in return. Heart-feeling fic here.
Princess Artemis 2003-10-27 ch 1,	abuseVery thought provoking and unique handling of that particular interpersonal conundrum. Very well done. Although I don't know if it's just my computer, but the formatting is very weird. Probably my comp...
Mlle. Dinkley 2002-12-05 ch 1,	abuseThis was a very well written story that remained in character, while also taking the guys into a different situation. I do agree w/the other reviewer in that it would be easier to follow (not to mention easier on the reader's eyes)if it were broken into chapters. I hope to see more stories from you soon.
cinder126 2002-04-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was awesome is there more? Please say there is more... I am begging you this story is too good. Will our beloved Egon fall in love with Janine and will she forgive Peter. Also this story would be easier to read if you broke it down into chapters.

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