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Lazyman12 5/12/13 . chapter 18Thanks for writing such a great story! |
Corvus corax alba 5/5/13 . chapter 5Yeah baby-Sasuke! Cute, I wanna cuddle him! No, I'm not a Sasuke fangirl, I just like babys :) Haha I could almost feel the atmosphere at the breakfast szene. Very well written. Cheers, C.c.a. |
Corvus corax alba 5/5/13 . chapter 3Hihi now that was funny Kakashi screwed it up |
Corvus corax alba 5/5/13 . chapter 2Oh man, they aren't that dumb, are they? The name, surname, the hair, the eyes... I love Kushina and Minato, they are so cheery! Cheers, C.c.a |
Champion of Justice 4/22/13 . chapter 18Awesome story. Great job. |
tsukuyomi.sakurachi 4/21/13 . chapter 18This was probably the most awesome time-travel fanfic that I have ever seen. You showed Naruto's feelings and how he would deal with everything when he would go to the past. Also, seeing Minato and Kushina's feelings, it really made me cry a bucket of tears and now my nose is suffering from a runny nose. I felt that this fanfic was pretty mature and really, it made me smile when I read the last chapter. Naruto may have or may not have answers to his questions but he's satisfied for now of the answers that he has for now. You know, how Minato and Kushina dealt with seeing their son traveling to the past would probably one the most realistic reactions I have ever seen in fanfictions. You depicted Minato as not an invincible and infallible Hokage and father but a man who is human and has to deal with problems pertaining in how to deal with being a father and being a Hokage at the same time. Still, the meeting between Sasuke and Naruto is one of the best moments that I have ever read in your fanfic. I never really liked some of the fanfics which deals with Sasuke since it mostly deals with his ego-centric and brooding nature as an enemy of Naruto. However, in your fanfic, you showed him to be both an enemy or a friend to Naruto depending on different perspectives. It was a nice change to the canon and some of the fanfics that I saw and read. You also showed some of the bonds as a friend between Naruto and Sasuke though you also didn't forget his true nature of being obsessed with revenge or to get his family back so I think that is why you showed him trying to get the scroll of the time-travel jutsu. I am one of the readers which really likes reading stories or fanfics which deals with bonds and family fluff and truly, your fanfic is full of that. Keep up the good work and I really loved your fanfic. I am really glad that you completed this and I hope that your are satisfied with my long review. :) |
Minkauchiha 4/14/13 . chapter 18 Awww! That was the absolute best naruto fanfiction story I have ever read so far... Such a wonderful story! ( You literally had me in tears durring some moments) I really loved that you added sasuke at the end there, and had a perfect ending for our you |
Kannika 4/6/13 . chapter 18THIS WAS ALL LEVELS OF AMAZING AND NOT OKAY AT THE SAME TIME. I'M SMILING LIKE AN IDIOT AND SOBBING SIMULTANEOUSLY. But in all seriousness, a wonderful story. One of the best I've found concerning time travel and Naruto's parents, it all played out very well. I'm glad you decided to end it the way you did, because as much as I was rooting for Naruto to save his parents and the world at the same time, it was unrealistic. Your way was more bittersweet, and more real, and more touching. A really great story. Thank you! :) |
Yuki-san loves KKM 3/30/13 . chapter 18I read this story once, almost a year ago, I think. I couldn't review then since I can't think of anything to say. Actually, I still can't think of anything to say now but I'll try to make the longest review I could. While I was reading the end of chapter 17, I was almost considering playing Sadness and Sorrow but I didn't want to cry like a baby so I didn't. The whole story just... I don't know how to say it. I'm feeling the same thing I felt while I was watching those episodes from Shippuden, the ones about Jiraiya dying, and Naruto's birth. Like really depressed but with a glimmer of hope or something. Considering the genre of this story, this is a good thing. I loved how you made the story fit into canon... well, at least the canon of last year. With all the stuff the Kishimoto wrote over the last year, this story doesn't fit too well now. Still, kudos to you for making such a brilliant story. I loved the interaction between Naruto and his parents and I loved the build-up. Like the characters, and I'm sure, the rest of the fandom, I wish Naruto could have done something but we all know that this was for the best. I loved how you tied together those little details with the one shoebox. I could keep listing everything I loved about the story but that would be stupid since that would mean typing every single thing you wrote. But, I guess I could say that what I loved most about your story was how you ended it. It isn't the happy ending you find in fairy tales but this end was much more fitting. It's not the happiest ending but it is most certainly a hopeful one. I want to thank you for writing this story. I'm glad I was able to read it. |
Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 18 this is a wonderful story. i'm glad i got to read it. |
Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 16 aww baby Sasuke melted my heart. |
RiiXHitsuHina 3/21/13 . chapter 18OMG! That is sooo sweet! You make me cry for 3 chapters non stop! Thank you very much! |
fancyfairy 3/19/13 . chapter 18This story is great I loved it so much. It was so funny in some parts, and really sad in others. It always kept you interested. |
Silver Dragonfly 3/16/13 . chapter 18Well written and well rounded story. ) |
Mangastream7 3/13/13 . chapter 18Some parts were boring but over all i would say its pretty good |