Whoa, what are these tears?

This was wonderful. If this is canon, then I would love AWL even more.

I just loved this! I remembered playing the game and how sad I was when she died, and how I always went into their house, the music would play and make me feel sorry for Galen and how he was all alone. Anyhow, it was sad how lonely he was, but at the end it was so cute how they where together again. You did a really good job on this!

Stories like this are necessary to the HM repertoire. You've done us a great favour to upload it let alone take up the challenge! your writing is poignant yet simple and I think that's the best kind. Sometimes it's easy to bog the characters down under thick descriptive text-brick but here the natures of both alive and dead are clear and lovely.

This is just one of those shots that proves the worth of side characters in the HM series. They certainly have more dimensions than a lot of fans give them credit for.

I always wondered how Gavin felt after Nina died. I like how the story is so simple but you managed to weave lots of emotion into it as well. I've got nothing to comment on that's bad! By the way what's a fanfic Plot swap challenge?