 Eienvine 5/23/12 . chapter 37 These are so great! I'm really enjoying them. |
 scarlotti 5/17/12 . chapter 37I love this little introspective minute of decision. |
 scarlotti 3/17/12 . chapter 36"making some sort of attempt to unbury herself from the overbearing pile of paperwork that has been breeding in her inbox recently" - THIS Awesome. As far as the rest of the chapter is concerned, you didn't need to worry ;). If this is a lesser effort, you obviously have a natural feel for their voices. Particularly, I like the way that you chronicle his invasion of her thoughts.
I think that in some ways, Audrey would naturally try to overanalyze and/or be slightly unsure of what to do with any serious feelings she might have towards Nathan (or anyone), as it seems that she hasn't had any serious emotional connections to a person in the past - both as Audrey, and even as Lucy and Sarah. Audrey2 seems to have started her first serious relationship after Audrey's imprinting and even though some have speculated about a more serious relationship with Dave/Vince in the past, the depth of that relationship/s was not enough for them to tear apart Heaven/Earth to find her when she "disappeared" either time. So - Well done, I tip my hat to you ma'am! More soon? :) |
 Kat Treefern 3/14/12 . chapter 36 Thanks for another short story. Love the variety and the insight into characters in short unconnected stories. Its's a great idea. |
 scarlotti 3/11/12 . chapter 33 (Bear with me as I spam you with reviews, I'm a few chapters behind (yay for me!)) Again, love it! This does such a great job of neatly packaging the progression of Nathan's personality and the changes that we witness during the first and second season. |
 scarlotti 3/11/12 . chapter 32 Yes! Love it, love it, love it. It's great how you put such a realistic feel into intimate moments between Audrey and Nathan. |
 MagPie003 3/10/12 . chapter 35My heart literally ached after reading this entry. It is your best one yet. Please keep them coming. I am just loving this series. |
 collective2220 3/2/12 . chapter 33I had noticed that he changed throughout the seasons but I just never realized how much because honestly I stare at Lucas Bryant throughout the episode. Who doesn't? But I hope you feel better, these colds/flus are draining |
 MaryNotAmy 3/2/12 . chapter 33Awww. Poor Nathan. |
 nertooold54 2/26/12 . chapter 32I can imagine Nathan staying up all night so he could convince himself and then just coming out with it. What makes his abruptness so endearing is that it is so him. I'm hoping we see more fluff between them. |
 nertooold54 2/26/12 . chapter 25Fun! Fun! Fun! That's all I can say about this chapter. |
 nertooold54 2/26/12 . chapter 18This chapter captures the heartache that I felt for Nathan during this episode. I think Audrey slept with Brody because it was safe. |
 Aedammair 2/23/12 . chapter 32Fluff aside, Ad Rem is quite possibly my favorite. :) |
 VentiGirl 2/23/12 . chapter 32This one is cute. I think better for the not over thinking, and I think it could happen anytime. |
 collective2220 2/22/12 . chapter 32That was just so them. "I know so now you know" is my favorite line. |