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| Reviews for Must Not Fail |
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  Jack 7/26/12 . chapter 2 Well a third chapter afterwards would be nice. I really enjoyed it, but there were too far chapters for me. |
 Mai Ascot 6/1/12 . chapter 2Yay! Another chapter! Thanks so much for making this story seem finished, I really enjoyed it! (WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?) |
| Mai Ascot 5/29/12 . chapter 1 Wow... that's very deep. He just wanted to see Francis... Could this be a two-shot, maybe with Francis' PoV following? Just asking. I can't help but get the feeling that the story's not over... |
| KHwhitelion 3/11/12 . chapter 1 ...too lazy to log in... Awww come onnnnn give us another chapter! I needs more Francis in my life XD This was dark and yet...different. I like that Malcolm decided he didn't want to die, and ended up scared of what he was doing. |
| Absalom2692 10/31/11 . chapter 1 Woah. Intense. Intense, but good. |
| lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve 10/8/11 . chapter 1 Please continue |
| Some person you don't know 10/5/11 . chapter 1 Come on! You have to continue this! |
