|Reviews for Must Not Fail|
| Jack 7/26/12 . chapter 2
Well a third chapter afterwards would be nice. I really enjoyed it, but there were too far chapters for me.
| Mai Ascot 6/1/12 . chapter 2
Yay! Another chapter! Thanks so much for making this story seem finished, I really enjoyed it! (WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?)
| Mai Ascot 5/29/12 . chapter 1
Wow... that's very deep. He just wanted to see Francis...
Could this be a two-shot, maybe with Francis' PoV following? Just asking. I can't help but get the feeling that the story's not over...
| KHwhitelion 3/11/12 . chapter 1
...too lazy to log in...
Awww come onnnnn give us another chapter! I needs more Francis in my life XD
This was dark and yet...different. I like that Malcolm decided he didn't want to die, and ended up scared of what he was doing.
| Absalom2692 10/31/11 . chapter 1
Intense, but good.
| lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve 10/8/11 . chapter 1
| Some person you don't know 10/5/11 . chapter 1
Come on! You have to continue this!