 CrashCourse1.0 12/13/11 . chapter 1this is probably 11 years too late, but my god, i love your fics, the way you write. i lovelovelove your works to a million billion bits. |
 chibi heishi 12/1/10 . chapter 1And yet another nice, touching story. Not to mention that drugged!Dick was hilarious. |
 Princess613 8/28/09 . chapter 1Nice Job. |
 Amethyst Asheryn 1/15/09 . chapter 1Wow. The accident was so ironic - avoiding the drunk and getting hit by a different car instead. Great.
Not many stories like this keep me interested all the way through, but this one sure did. The end reminded me of Terry Pratchett's writing style, which I love, so you get brownie points for that too. Alongside the ones you get for characterization, kick-butt descriptions for the accident scene, well-written "fluff" (for lack of a better term), and Superman's saving of the jet. If all fanfics were written like this one, I'd be a very happy person.
Dick beamed at Alfred's reassuring words. "Cool! Then let's go downstairs and 'Deck the Halls with Boston Charlie!'"
"Yes. Quite." Alfred ceded, beneath an arched eyebrow.
... Best line in the entire piece.
"You could have crashed, Bruce(,) and I wouldn't have *ANYbody*, anymore!" Should there be a comma after anybody? For some reason I don't think there should be. ... Key words there are don't think. ...
"knowing
he may have to use his considerable strength to manually put the jet into the water as controlled as possible." I think this could be worded better. Maybe:
"knowing he might have to use his considerable strength to manually put the jet into the water in as controlled a way as possible."
Ashe |
 Creative Spark 2/2/07 . chapter 1Aw I enjoyed this, you are a very good author.
-Creative Spark |
 Demon Faith 8/16/05 . chapter 1Yes - I've finally found some good Dick h/c! Am working my way through all your Bruce/Dick-centric stories and I'm impressed with the wealth that's offered - excellent stuff. |
 MeShelly 7/1/04 . chapter 1Very cute. Very strong emotional ties very nicely displayed. Michelle |
 Jenihenpen 2/2/04 . chapter 1_ Magic. Aw.. I love this! |
 Nayvera 12/13/03 . chapter 1 This is an incredible story. Absolutely amazing. The only thing that put a slight wrinkle in it for me, was how Bruce kept calling Dick, "chum." But that's all - the rest is absolutely perfect. Finally - a story actually good enough to be labelled, "fanfication" in my book. |
 Miyo 7/14/03 . chapter 1 AW!DICK!Poor little Robin, so banged up! More people should review you, you write very well! |
 hobgoblin 4/26/03 . chapter 1 Only two reviews? Im shocked. your story is well written and has made good use of the characters. i love the dick/bruce relationship and you have portrayed it perfectly.
keep writing. |
 Rosepixie 11/12/02 . chapter 1Great story! I loved it! It really showed the characters as human beings with all their faults and strengths. I loved the portrayal of Bruise. He was perfect. Barbara was great too! Fantastic story! |
 JulietDeWinter 4/27/02 . chapter 1... Wow. That was the most intense drama I've ever read. Keep writing, you're one of my favourites. |