   quirky21 1/10/08 . chapter 11Yay! At least one made it out OK... |
| Katescats 5/31/07 . chapter 11 Hi
I just read your story it's was greatand i like the ending. |
| Mari Skyrin-Sarker 11/30/05 . chapter 11 great story. |
| Miss Teinge 11/20/04 . chapter 11 Ah! Pretender fic! Weren't you just so rotted when they cancelled it? I heard there was supposed to be some big movie-finale thing or something, but I never got to see it. Anyways, very nice story! |
| B Oots 7/25/03 . chapter 11 I really enjoyed the story. I also liked the ending. |
| light foot lady 11/27/02 . chapter 6 still reading, but loving every minute! you're a great story teller! |
| Kaat 10/31/02 . chapter 11 I absolutely LOVED it! I'm so glad you've finished it. I have really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks!
Kaat |
| maestra 10/4/02 . chapter 11 Molly,
Wow, sorry to see that Lyle and Raines and the Centre Sweepers have mistreated poor Janie so. I was saddened to read that she had been deafened by their 'procedure'.
I was hoping for the story to go on a little longer to be honest. Glad to see Jarod,and her family safely away from the Centre though. But with Jaine deaf, well, sort of a bittersweet ending I would say.
Looking forward to your next story! |
| Melanie-Anne 10/4/02 . chapter 11 just wanted to say this was great, though I was hoping for a little more shippery stuff between J & MP *g*
nice job.
Mel |
| anon 10/3/02 . chapter 11 That was a good ending but then I am a strong believer that you don't need to have a pat ending for every story. Life isn't like that so why should a story. I look forward to you future writings! ;) |
| pretender fan 10/2/02 . chapter 11 that was great! maybe for the next parts you should have one of the girls' parents find out that they know Jarod's family or something! I guess I'm just "Jarod should find his family" happy or something! |
| JParker 9/30/02 . chapter 1 OH MY GOSH! That was great! Good job, can't wait to read more...I love how Janie is a pretender and Jarod is caught...ahhhhhhh |
| Renee 9/30/02 . chapter 10 Write more! it's a good story so far! |
| MMB 9/27/02 . chapter 8 This is a very interesting story, written from a most unusual angle. I'm enjoying seeing Sydney, Miss Parker and Jarod through the eyes of talented children - and you're keeping them very nicely in character. Please do continue. I look forward to your next installments with anticipation. Good job! |
| anon 9/4/02 . chapter 7 I love Janie's character. I like the idea of "Not a Pretender". I can't wait for your next charpter |
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