great story. I hope you get better and make the next great chapter

This is soooo goooooood!

Kyaaaa i loved that!

awesoem story!

Are you two going to continue this story because its really awsome!

I loved it! Nami and Luffy drunk was the best xD

Aahahhahahahah the last part is the best XD so funny ! And the story is really nice :D

Wow, three updates in the past few days! :3 I feel so lucky XD

Anyway, I really enjoyed this story (but then again, that's normal for me XD)

You and Totashi did really well at writing this...and the LuNa in this story was just glorious :)

'Princess on the dance floor/King of the dance floor' They're the King and Queen of every alternate universe story, aren't they? :D

LUFFY AND NAMI GRIND DANCING? 0.0 (faints with joy)

"I'll kill you" Nami's as stubborn as ever XD

"Did I do something wrong…"

"Well, aside the fact you really aroused her with your famous grind dancing, I don't think so…" :3 No words can sum up how hilarious that quote was

"You don't need courage for that… Luffy just doesn't think when he does dance like that…" Does Luffy EVER think about what he's doing? XD

The scene where Luffy and the other guys saved Nami, Vivi, Robin and Kaya was brillaint. Especially since Luffy just intimidated Arlong (the bastard) and his crew by just glaring them away (maybe Luffy used the conqueror's haki on him :D)

Luffy and Nami getting drunk was hilarious as well XD (I'm surprised that Zoro didn't try and cut them off sooner XD)

Then there was the bathroom scene...

:D

That's all that needs to be said about that :P

The ending was hilarious as well, seeing as Nami and Luffy have to be actually pulled away from each other XD

This story was so cute and I loved it to bits :D

WoW! I didn't know that Luffy was so smooth Nice story! Keep updating PLZI heart u!

Hey yo By the time you see this. I have msg you xP oh yeah THE ENDING WAS REALLY NICE XP!

Aw! Such a sweet story, I may need to fill a cavity. XD

Great One-Shot!