I've been away for awhile...I have to catch up! Great chapter...I love the Mallory angle of the story...can't wait to see where this goes!

i hope your mother is ok, your mother will be in my prayers, i sadly lost my grandfather to cancer two years ago and my aunt has now been diagnosed with cancer as well. if you need to talk to anyone feel free to message me.

I loved the chapter, im looking forward to finding out more about Karl :)

sorry to hear about your family, holly...now onto the story: ooooohhh boy, this is sooooooo not looking good...karl knows nicky...hmm, they have a past aparently...this looks like TROUBLE...and connie is NOT gonna be nice...wonder where this is going...and if connie doesn't like kids, WHY is she marrying someone WITH KIDS?...keep it coming.

alisa

Holly! You're back! Your chapter really made my day today! :-) It's so nice to see something new from you.

I know you and your family have a hard time right now and of course you don't have the head for writing fanfics at the moment... but I'm glad you published this chapter. Just know I hope everything will turn out okay for your Mom and your whole family.

I was shocked to read that you get flames for your fics... that's a horror for every fanfic writer :-( I don't know why people do that... I mean critism is okay but the mean stuff some people seem to write has nothing to do with critism. People like this want to make writers feel bad about their fics and that's just not right. I don't want you to feel like this... because... lots of people like your fics :-) I told you before that I'm normally not a Nick/Greg shipper but am open for everything and I really like YOUR work. You're a very talented writer and you write very thoughtful and entertaining :-) And well... you made me a Nick/Greg shipper (at least for your fics) :-)

This chapter was amazing, especially considered what you're going through right now. I gotta say... compared to your other chapters I kinda felt that you have a lot on your mind right now. Especially when you write what Nick is feeling and thinking... he is a sensitive guy and I could imagine a good character to get into while writing... he could be a great release point too for all the emotions you're working through right now.

I have great respect for you getting this chapter out with all the stuff on your mind right now.

I gotta say I'm now very, very, very curious... why does Karl know Nick? What happened 15 years ago? Have they been together? I thought Greg was Nick's first man?

I'll be patiently waiting for your next chapter, so take your time... even though I have to say the suspense will make it hard for me ;-)

Take care! Wish you all the best! :-)

Glad you are still writing this. Nice update, that Connie is a piece of work. Sounds like there are more twists and turns coming. Sorry about your Mom's illness, take care.

great chapter) who was the man connie is getting married to, an how does he know nick? please update )

sorry about your mom, hope everything is going to be fine, just be positive.

I LOVE this story so far, it's really well written and you make the characters seem soo real. :)

Quick question, when did Nick hurt Greg for the first time... I don't remember :(

Any way great story, and so sorry to hear about your mum, I really hope you update soon lovely xx

another GOOD one, holly...i'm glad, that lillian showed up to help out with the unpacking...nick needed someone from HIS family...and it gave them a chance to work through things...looking forward to more.

alisa

WOW that was just brilliant :D

greg's father needs to get control over his wife...she's gonna cause MORE stress, then they need...i understand that she loves her son...but, it's time to back off...and let him LIVE his life.

the move i think will be GOOD for everyone on the sanders-stokes family.

keep it coming..

alisa

WOW that was brilliant :D

Very good chapter. I suspected that Kayla was a lesbian. Interesting twist! Well done!

HOLLY,

another good one...i think, that's what nicky needed...he's still gonna have some rough spots, we allllllll know that...and connie, needs a GIBBS SLAP for her mouth...lol.

looking forward to more.

alisa

Is it bad that I hope something happens to Connie to knock her off her high horse? She's a jealous person and acting like a spoiled little brat.

Just like me and I understand perfectly: I try toi update often but with mu job's change, I've not a lot of time for writing.

And this chapter worthed thé wait especially with the ending. :-) I' m a Big romantic lol