You are a powerful writer and immensely, I'm going to go with the word, empathic. I throughoughly enjoyed this story. I've liked all of your work that I've read so far but its because your worl is crafted without been rigid. You have a very natural flow to your writing. Anyway, the ending was suberb, thank you for not ending it on chapter 9 because this was brillant. Keep writing. A very happy reader, Dark_wolf

Thanks for the mention :) Anytime, that's what fellow writers/ readers are here for. You're a great writer so don't let writers block get you down.

I'm afraid I can't read chapter eight because my web-blocker just blocked it and I don't know how to disable it. *sigh* Anyway I'll stay tuned for chapter 9

Hello...

Glad someone's enjoying this. I wrote this all done in one night, and the raw format wasn't anything what you're reading right now. I was all anger and short cuss sentences.

My muse eventually calmed me down and we went through the lot carefully and tried to trim down unsuitable parts and beef up places that needed such treatment. In the end it was not much different from the original.

Why am I writing this? Maybe some might call me ranting... OK. I am ranting. It's just that lately I had this terrible writer's block, then God decided to throw in some cold, sore throat and fever together. On top of that I had ulcers. O Joy.

I'll stop... but not before thanking Dark Wolf and Sioned. U guys pulled me through. U may not knew how, but u did. U 2 did.

Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while, I couldn't get near the internet. What can I say... I don't know where to begin. I mean I think your writing is great and the story is too but I'm really beginning to get a shiver down my spine. I'm really intrigued now to see where you go with this. Keep it up.

hmmm rveneg is a dish severd sweet i suppose

he is Getting way to much insane, is this the picture you saw?

but this is getting good. Was Gidion the leader dude? and EWWW gross the description of the rapist!

good job, MORE MORE MORE

and he cleared the no return part of the jumpiung off the deep end,

wow, he just killed him just like that, (nice way to die mind you while listening to an orchestra) whats he gonna do to the leader Midton chap? hmmm

freaky

more!

ohh and here i thought you would end it, MUCH BETTER! he is defintly taking a turn for the worst and omg!

MORE MORE MORE MORE, how far off the deeep end did old warren really jump?

okay you eith had the girl killed , or she killed her father, or reveled what angel to the whole world, hmm clifhanger that i'm GLAD I can cheat and lok to the netx one

ahhh! omg this is kinda sad, wil the next chap be where they reunite, as im Warren and the mystery girl

or with the girl and her grandma?

whatever, it'll work

good job!

awwwww

Interesting,

Warren is no longer a one dimensional character. Have you picked a name for her yet? I oly ask because I always find that the hardest part :)

wow, i'm honored.

but you should be given credit as well. i can honestly see him doing this.

At first i thought she was going to break his holo watch and run away, but this works MUCH better

more please :)

I have one big complaint about this story, You can't leave it there! You have to continuye, pleaseeeeeeeee. I'm sure there are lots of lurkers out there who agree with me. PLease continue, hardly anyone writes Warren stories.

yes make him wait it out with her, please

ohh i like this one, you make him a rich snob and yet still likable. kudos

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