Apart from the inconsistencies to the film (The date and timescale of the infection spreading) I really enjoyed this, reminded me weirdly when i was back in year 11. strange wave of nostalgia

These fucking idiots deserve to get infected.

This is well written, however, one thing that needing pointed out is a whole country wouldnt be quarantined on the first day of the outbreak, nor would their be mass school closures either. They thought it was riots for the first few days due to all the chaos and confusion, they didnt realise it was a virus till maybe day three or four. As mentioned at the begining of 28 weeks later it was 15 days after the outbreak that Britain was quarantined by the UN. Good job though.

Enjoyable story, one thing i had to point out was that the outbreak occured in Cambridge, if you look on the cameras at the begining it says Cambridge Primate Research Centre. Other than that, good job :)

Great plot. write spelling and punctuation