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  MistressRiruko 7/9/12 . chapter 7 Hey, I'm back! Nice chapter :) I liked the description and there where only a few little mistakes. I would suggest writing in paragraphs though. Great chap, though! Update! |
 KaylaDestroyer 7/2/12 . chapter 7Nice chapter! You did a good job at describing their relief when they finally got a drink. ;) Update soon! |
| MistressRiruko 4/8/12 . chapter 1 New chappie soon then? Yayz!:D |
| Angel Lovely Rose 4/6/12 . chapter 6 XD ikr? I thought sid locked in a closet and the artie thing would be hilarious! I'm going to update soon!in about less than a week or 2 ill have the nwext chapter ready.i promise! :) |
| MistressRiruko 4/6/12 . chapter 6 An update! *hugs* Yay yay yay ya- Random person with icy glare:*gives icy glare at me* Me:*shuts up* Ahem. Loved the chapter! Lol, Sid got locked in the closet...:D *giggles* Sid:Oh,come on!It was an accident! Me:And it was funny when Diego ate Artie...well,that's life 4 wild animals anyway :P Diego: It served the feathered puffball right. And less errors! :) Apart from some commas right in front of starting sentences and 2 missing words, gr8 story! And try 2 make them a bit longer like u said,as well. :3 Looking 4ward 2 the next chapter! |
| KaylaDestroyer 3/26/12 . chapter 6 Welcome back! :) Nice chapter! The part qith Artie was funny, and Sid lockibg himself in the closet. Update soon! |
| angel rose 3/24/12 . chapter 1 Hey it's me princessmiddleast. I'm sorry for not updating in such a looonnnggg time!I been really busy with other I'm so sorry about I'm gonna change my penname to angel rose |
| MistressRiruko 1/18/12 . chapter 1 Um...I don't mean 2 b rude but when r u going 2 update this and the rest of your stories? I'm quite eager 2 find out what happens nxt in your stories, so plz update them soon!:D |
| MewBlueberry 12/13/11 . chapter 3 Hiya. Cool idea so far. You said to point out if there were any words missing, well when you said you think you fixed the problem but tell you if there were still any or grammar mistake or whatever. I think there was a missing word when you said, "Princess:Hello my wonderful reviewers!I noticed my computer keeps cutting off the words so I fixed the let me know if you see any grammer mistakes or some words cut off." In between the 'so I fixed the _?_ let me know if you...' |
| princessmiddleast 11/14/11 . chapter 5 Gotta MistressRiruko! :D Yep Sid that's ur snoring... Sid:! Me:I think he's gonna blow.. Sid:I DON'T SNORE LIKE THAT!GAHHHH!*RUNS into his room and slams the door* Me:Well...that could have gone better... Lol. |
| MistressRiruko 11/12/11 . chapter 5 This is atually KawaiiKoneko. I'll be called MistressRiruko from now on! Sid, is that your snoring i can hear coming from that recorder over there? |
| princessmiddleseast 11/5/11 . chapter 5 *takes out a recorder and plays it and we all here sid's snoring* And this is not ur snoring? |
| Princessmiddleast 11/4/11 . chapter 5 Lol! She's right Sid you do snore loud! |
| KawaiiKoneko 11/3/11 . chapter 5 Nice chappie! And lol, Sid u snore like a big loud pig. Sid: Do not! Yeah u do,u should hear yourself. Update plz! |
| Angel Lovely Rose 11/3/11 . chapter 5 thx for everyone who reviewed. :D out of all the stories on fanfiction this one seems to be my best one ever! KayalaDestoryer,thx so much for reviewing every chap. i post!i'm glad to see u enjoying this story. MewPainappuru:IKR?Sid is awsome!He's my fav. charector in ice age as well :D |
