I really enjoy this so far :) It's nice to read a story that has the courier playing both sides- the details are phenomenal. You're writing inspires me to write better. Please continue!

Wow, amazing how so little words can hold such promise. I can tell you're really talented and can't wait 'til you post more!

Promising, and very detailed. Extremely well done for a prologue, but if the rest of it is this detailed and complicated, it may become hard on the eyes for the everyday reader. Sometimes, too much detail can be a bad thing. Regardless, I enjoyed it, so you'll have a dedicated reader either way :)