What is with demon's and ramen? It must be something in the broth lol

I've been off the computer for a while. I go a way and look at you getting all busy! I finally catch up and Naruto's gonna be eaten by a F***ing spider demon! Whoa...

This chapter is very good and also everything is working out greatly in this chapter that for sure.

to much oc sorry most oc storys never take hold people just don't want to read about oc's

Just to let you know you been have some spelling mistake but they kind of minor. But anyway you were right those were brtual deaths that for sure to the village people.

This is a very epic chapter and also well now I know what you mean about how the fire started then.

THis is a very epic start of a chapter you know that and I can't wait to see more that for sure.

Cool start. I can't wait to see how Mark and Naruto will get along here.

Also, i kinda got a Soul Calibur feeling when Tsunade looked over those weapons.

This is a very interesting start of story you know that but everything is in center font?