Read this the first time around and this is hilarious! I would totally love to an extension on this.

Good job.

Lol, nice story!

Badass Bella with a bat! Thanks for entering the contest. :D

Hola!

Thanks so much for entering Part I of the contest. I really hope this entry gets made into a one-shot in Part II or that you are considering continuing it into a one-shot!

What a fun incorporation of "Rose" in this. Or describing a character that looks like Rose. But what if that character does exist so then the police go and question Rose and she meets Emmett or the no good dirty cheating muthafucka and a dual love blossoms through mistaken identities. And maybe this real Rose knows Bella.

Good luck in the contest.

xxNaya, one-third of your fabulous contest hosts

fucking awesome! Someone please pick this up!

This is my favorite - love it! Would definitely read a full story about these two.

Bella beating the s*** out of a truck? LOL That would be awesome. This was cool. :)

" a few self-defense moves ran through my head, just in case"

HAHAHAHAHA! This is the best one I've read. I hope you win!

Love the crazy!