More! More! I want to see more! BWAHAHAHAHA!

Wow. I haven't read this in a while, but reading it again...I love it more and more! Where's the rest? Please update! More Kenji, more Kenshin, more other peeps! _ Hee hee...and when are the baddies gonna appear? Is Aoshi and Misao going to get involved? _ Great job!

Wow! Wonderful chapter! _ I love how you explained everything, well, at least almost everything that can be explained at the moment. So what's going to happen next? Why do Saitoh and Junzo need Kenshin's help? Is Kenji gonna fight a battle? Me like that you added a bitta Chizuru to Kenji's POV part. _ Great job so far and I can't wait for more!

good good. and it's Chiruzu, rather than "Chizuro". *sounds it in head a few times before grimacing* that didn't sound right.

*laughs at the last part* well, at least some things haven't changed. eh, Yahiko-CHAN?

Ya: CHAN JA NE YO!

*insert large dustcloud of flying fists, shinais, and bokkens, "oh my!"*

First of all: the fic is great, carefully written (it's a miracle a fic with almost no typos) and the plot seems really promising. But the thing that really caught my atention and got me to write these review was something you mentioned on a comment, last chapter, in response to a previous review. In that comment you said to watch out for the appearance of characters we might not think to still be around. Specifically you refered to Hiko. Tell me: IS HE GOING TO APPEAR LATER ON! I'm a huge Hiko fan, just say yeeeessss, please, please, pleeeeease (insert puppy look here).

Well, sorry for that last outburst, just wanted to let you know, the fic is real good, and I just hope well get to see more of it soon.

Hmmm weird twists in this story. I wonder if the Shishio-stuff is true...

Ah! Another great chapter! _ Junzo sure is mysterious..._ Very happy that you brought Cho back! _ I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Ja ne! _x

*smiles* k!

nice battle scene here! seems pretty much that Junzo's school is like a counter-attack to Mitsurugi.

is Kenji ever gonna reconcile with Kenshin? that kid has GOT to get over it. yeesh, one can only hate someone for so long, much less your own parent.

Cool story, hope you update soon

Another wonderful chapter! _ Things are getting interesting and I like what you have so far! Please hurry up with the next chapter as I like to read your fic. _ Great job! Btw, Junzo is confuzzeling me...just what side is he on? Oro... _ x

ara. so Junzo WAS under Saitou's command, at one point. this kicks things up a bit. waitaminute... how OLD is Junoz?

Tae took up her husband's surname, eh? not surprising. sometimes, it's the other way around. yes, the hubby will take the wife's surname as his own. though "Sekihara Kaede" sounds a bit funny...

BTW, "Battousai" is a proper noun. which means it's a regular name, like Yahiko or Tae. the "the" isn't necesaary. \;;; i lost count how many times i mentioned that.

I like this fic so far. Tis gone onto me favorites list. _ As you said at the end of your author's notes for this chapter, I can't wait till Saitoh shows up. Btw, is Kenji gonna be featured in here? Or is he just a minor character? What about Oniwabanshuu or Hiko? _ Great job so far!

cool story! especially when the new OVAs are so depressing, i really need your story to cheer me up...geez why did they have to do that to Kenshin anyway.

Ah, I found the fourth chapter! Just a quick note, I love the conversation in the beginning between Sano and Kenshin about his illness! Horray Sano! (not that I'm biased, or anything...)

Here's a review for you! You've got the makings of an excellent fic here and it is easy to see your improvements each chapter. Two words of advice to make reading easier, break up large blocks of dialogue and separate italicized thoughts from paragraphs. Also, even though this is action/adventure it never hurts to get more into character's heads. :) Good luck, keep writing!