Great job! the summary kind of drew me away at first, but after reading, i realize how good of a job you did!

What happen to the other toulon puppet except for blade, jester, and six shooter? Good story.

I like! I watched Puppet Master VS Demonic Dolls. It was cool/funny, but I actually only watched to see Corey Feldman lol. Cant wait to see where this story goes.

Very well done. Please keep it up. :)

Okay, i know i haven't seen all the movies, but this is great! I can get the idea anyway, so keep it up!

Good chapter. The extra editing helped I think. Blade having flashbacks is not a good thing but makes for a good story. Especially id while "resting" he sort of acts out what he is flashing back too. Get friends and family confused with memories of enemies.

Loved the Puppet master 3, think it was 3, reference. It did always bother me that Blade didn't act sooner to save Tank.

I would be willing to Beta if you are still looking for help.

Not bad, I'm not a fan of song lyrics in stories but to each there own.

Its a good beginning but I am confused. Are the puppets people now? Why else would the be getting candy in there stockings and so forth. Are they still puppets but have to eat and such? Why didn't Robert rebuild Pinhead? Seriously Pinhead was ripped apart in the one movie...I think it was the third movie and he was rebulit by Tank. He only lost an arm in demonic toys.

Other than my questions really good start. I look forward to more.