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ah i can hear the Fourth Wall shattering now...

Aw, I like this story I hope your gonna go black and white 2 I already preordered black 2

zzzp2, I have not had time to read your story but i will get to it soon enough.

Wow... i am actually really sad, i had formed a bond with everything in this story... and now it's over...

Heh...i found this tale,still young,still growing,a long time ago...it was boring,but always i found this story,just searching for something good to read...this story really grew...from a boring group of paragraphs and references,to something more...[tips hat] never stop writing...and i shall wait for your next big move...also[grins] The Game...you lost it...but it does'nt matter cuz you win 1 Internets,but seriously,keep writing good stuff,the site is filled with too much mediocre cr*p and

1337 is also from halo :D

Sniffle...sob. Why, why must this Masterpiece end? Dear Arceus, please somehow let zzzp2 make a sequel befor BW 2 comes out in October, thats like Five-dy months from now! I can't wait! I WILL DESTROY YOU ALL! RAAAWWWWRRRRR! ( Noms on a random cupcake )

Hey awesome, you did it! You finished it, good job! Here's a cake *hands a cake over*

So... what are you gonna do next?

Very interesting chapter. The "final boss" thing was a nice touch.

And congratulations! That's amazing; this is like the second ever completed story I've seen. And pretty epic intentionally-anticlimatic ending XD "Let's get Casteliacones!"

If you do start a sequel/ another story, let me know! :D

... It's over. I honestly can't believe it. It still feels like that in three days I'll be laughing at Unphezant's lameish jokes and lisening to Epic music with Stoutland. I can't believe it. I just can't believe it... And you still need to find the 78 sages or however many there are. Shoot a Mew. Wait, those things are pretty rare, don't shoot him. (and he's cuddly...)

Ripplestar: I'll miss this story.

Coralpaw: Noooo...

Dragonaxe: I... I don't know what to say...

Thistlepaw: Dragons. Kick. Butt. End of story.

Berryface: Wow, just... Wow.

Cobaltfang: ... I don't wanna sing anymore...

Flintheart: Epic man. That's all I got, yo.

Azul Fangs: ...*looks depressed*...

Blue Flare: And I go Back to December all the time... I give up. I agree with all of my family up there. It was awesome. Some may say Epic. But the lively story leaped off the screen and made us all laugh. And to think Trainer found this site in December by a fluke... From our family to your's...

All: Goodbye and Encore! Encore!

I guess you won't be seein' us for awhile. See ya in October! (hopefully...) Bye.

-SGWAH

I love the little joke with the faux menu. Poor N. I really hate to see this story end, but it was one wild ride. Great job, Z. Look forward to whatever story you do next.

This has been one of my favorite stories. It makes me laugh hilariously every time I read it, and I love the craziness(aka, with snivies, fuzzy pickles, blimps, just Unfezant in general). You are an awesome author, and I would love to see some more stories from you.

BlueblazeHeart -

Wow.

Just...wow.

You wrote some goofy stuff here, but this ending surprised me. The ending of Black and White was the best in the Pokemon franchise (barring only the Mystery Dungeon games), and I was expecting a bit of that poigency mixed in here; instead, you brought it all back while making it your own. Congratulations on all of your achievements: the humor (most just by randomness, but some were extremely clever-I'm looking at you, flaming water-ski reference), the dialogue, and the brilliant mix between the two. And, of course, you deserve considerable credit for finishing a story, something that authors all over will cite as the greatest achievement of any writer.

Now, as you continue, I would like to see some more actual diction (i.e. your actual narration) as opposed to the script format. You did very well with the script style, but there's some untapped potential for your actual diction, something that I would love to see developed.

My only other critique, really, is a warning on chapter lengths. This really isn't a fault you've shown yet-this story was absolutely brilliant with the shorter chapters, with nearly perfect divisions between bits of action. However, other projects of your might not benefit from this; make sure that the chapter lengths are the best they can be. Believe it or not, that really affects how the story goes! Take a look at ScytheRider's "Silver Resistance" for an example of longer chapters done right, if you need any convincing. (You don't seem like you do, but just in case...)

Anyway, that's really the only complaints I have. As I said, the dialogue was well done, the humor was random (maybe drag out the more random bits, since the REACTIONS to randomness are usually funnier than the randomness itself) but effective, you did well with the characterization, and you set your moods very well. Congratulations again on finishing this fic, and best of luck to you in the future!

Now I'm going to have to actually start that Mystery Dungeon fic I've been writing on. I can't keep watching everyone else finish their stories while I only have some lame little poem published! XD