IT IS GREAT!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

"She bit his leg". LOL. I like your characterisation - please continue with this, as it has the makings of a really great story!

I hope to see another update soon :)

x Bea xxxx

Wow, I like your story and love Bellamort :) You did a good job with Voldemort's character, it's more believable that it's a one-sided thing and Bella being the one to run after him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Interesting how she hides their affair. I look forward to reading more.

This is wonderfully in character. I love how it is in his point of view. It is amusing that he petrified her, and you just captured his actions and thoughts perfectly. You should continue, it would be a shame if it ended there.