GAAAHHHH! Update please! Maxwell is my favorite Hellsing character! (next to Alucard) I have to know what happens next!

oh lol i just looked at the reveiws! heh you already have someone who offered to proofread it! never mind then! but please update more!

I actually really like this story! It's got a few issues but I think it's great and you shouldn't stop writing it! If you need help proofreading it or something i would be happy to help!

Your basic plot seems to be alright, but the way you execute it has some issues. You have a lot of grammatical errors and spelling issues that make the story quite difficult to read. The characters are a just a tad too out of character for them to be believable... I mean, Integra is honourable, but not romantic. She would feel bad for laughing at someone's death, but what she wouldn't do is get very sentimental for someone who has already shown her nothing but contempt and hatred. She's a strong character, you don't have to make her emotional to make her a useful character! I'd say the same with Maxwell. He's a complete religious zealot focused on murdering everyone who isn't Catholic. He wouldn't get to liking Integra too fast, let's just say that much, even if he was dying.

(I've read most of this story, too, I'm just reviewing on chapter one). Hmm. Yeah. Another thing I would suggest, (though this is just preference) is that you not write in present tense. It tends to annoy most readers out of reading stories as well as it tends to be considered a sign of immature writing. I think you accidentally switch out of tenses somewhere in this, so that would probably be helpful if you went and fixed those too.

Uhmm.. Yeah. This is my favourite pairing in Hellsing, actually, because I really like illogical hatemances... I'm actually a beta if you would like one. I could proofread this for you and point out the areas with the most issues?

And remember, going back and fixing your stories is not like admitting to bullies; reviews are here to help. Just because the people are not adding smiley faces at the end of everything they write doesn't mean they don't have a genuine desire to help you improve your writing. Be open to criticism, and don't look at it as a personal attack.

Cheers!

NO! WHY!

plz update soon

Oooooooo please update sooon! i wanna know what happenes!

Quiston, its kinda a stuped quiston but well here it is, Alucard belongs to the Hellsing blood line right? Well John (Giovanni) was not born of Hellsing blood so wouldn't that mean he doesn't get to order Alucard around and Alucard still complitly belongs to Integra?

LOVE THE STORY! I'm writing my own IXM Fic right now NOOOO HENRY!(MAXWELL!)

This is such a great story

Update plz soon

I loved this chapter my school life? Well its boring I drawn insted of listen in class but i still get As Bs and Cs (couldnt Integra call of the engagement?)

What twits I hate it when ppl can't mind there own business. Anywho I luv this story and cant wait to see what happens next. : D god bless you as well have a happy thanksgiving

damn i hate people this story is really good i love it and also suckfic should be shut down.

look don't worry karma will coem back and bite those who are trolling you in the bum.

also god bless you and also amen!

I'm sorry for all that has happened to you and those people should just back off and leave you alone because you've done nothing wrong.

Oh and have a Happy Thanksgiving and I hope you're with people who love and support you!