Uh, yeah, I do have other things I've written other than SailorMoon fic. Not sure where you surfed in from, but my homepage on fanfiction ( .net/sexylyon) contains a few other stories in different settings.

Such an epic story! i would love to see a movie made from it! trully dont understand why only 42 reviews, I read it 4 times already and each time find something new. extremely well crafted, the characters are explored well down to their cores. do u have anything else to read besides sailormoon stories?

.GEE! w.o.w!

i usually do not comment but you have practically compelled me to do so with your writing as i wholeheartedly agree with the previous reviewer that this fic is sorely under-reviewed.

i totally did not expect your story to have such depth, astounding in its intensity. i know it's been way more than 10 years since the height of SM fame, but you've managed to somehow revive the longing within me to seek it out once more. This (and interlude too) was wonderfully written, with a very solid tightly weaved plot and valid twist that i can actually imagine fitting into an alternate storyline of the SM series. the development of characters are surprisingly pleasant and mature in their thinking. especially from mamoru's point as we really get a glimpse of what lies within his heart. and i absolutely adore the mental, emotional, understanding and power link that they share beyond normal comprehension in their love.

additionally, your grammar style, command of the language and exquisite literary choice of words, flowing languidly and the heady combination makes this a very gripping and compelling read, even propting me to use slightly better language than i normally would (haha).

however, like every other wonderfully written stories/fanfic, it leaves me(and i am sure other readers as well) at a slight loss when we finally reach the ending, hoping for more. if you do still read reviews as i hope you would read mine(eventually), if i may ask for a more extensive and elaborate reunion between mamorusagi;PLEASE *hints*winks*

but, regardless of whether you do or not, i still think this is fab. THANK YOU :)

*Sobs* This bright jewel is severely lacking in all the praises and attention it deserves! It alone should get an easy minimum of a thousand reviews, but to have less than a hundred? It's atrocious! The development of the characters was flawlessly executed. The mingling of the dark and light aspects, both in plot and character, were perfect in my eyes. Seriously, there's no limit of words to describe how incredible this story is, but there is a limit as to how well each word conveys it. Loved it,loved it, loved it!

o_o.

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That's the ending? OMG are you kidding me! I wanted a family reunion! ARGH!

God I can't believe it! My heart was singing at the end and it abruptly ends like that. THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL. Just like Interlude... You have a knack for leaving your readers desiring more!

But anywho... this was definitely a great story! I kept reading rants and raves about this story. At first I didn't think you'd write something like this... I thought you would've stuck to the sexually explicit writing category of writing. But man you sure proved me wrong! You're writing is absolutely great! This story was really good. Who would've thought that Mamoru's 3 desires was that? Especially the 3rd one... but it makes good sense, considering all what he's been through. Really good. Although I wish there was more *skin* interaction with Mamo/Usa, I can always read the Interlude for that hehe. Again, a great story. I noticed you updated your profile, hopefully you'll contribute more to Sailor Moon fanfiction in the near future. Hopefully a sequel to this story and Interlude would be part of that!

Wow, wow

I had read this story 100 time but every time its different. It's the best Crystal Tokyo story EVER. I hope you could write so kind of sequel to it.

I didn't want that to end! I would have loved to have known Mamoru's reaction to Chibi Usa. Ah well. That was a beautiful, brilliant story; it gave me shivers. Absolutely loved it.

I have had this set to read for a while, but I'm glad I managed to finish it. I really enjoyed it, and thought it was very very well written. Grammatically, there were one or two missed words, but they weren't distracting from the overall storyline, which I thought was unqiue and enchanting. Very good overall :)

I truly cannot believe that I had never read this story before. I remember reading "Interlude" way back when, so I still don't understand how "Relativity" slipped under my radar.

In short, this was absolutely amazing. I've never read a story with such depth and bredth, all while providing insight into the inner-most thoughts of the characters. You made them seam so real, so human, and it was wonderful. It was lovely to see Usagi come into her own as Neo-Queen Serenity, although it had been under more pleasant circumstances.

Mamoru's character was fantastic. And I loved how we got see so much more of him than we'd ever seen in the anime or manga. I've seen him get relegated to the backburner in so many fics, so it was refreshing that we were able to get into his head so much through your words.

Simply beautiful story and I'm so glad I was able to read it this time around. I knew getting back into the fandom would lead me great places!

I've lost count on how many times I've read this story throughout the years, and every time is like the first. I would love to write a review worthy of your story, but I'm afraid that my writings skills don't take me that far. I hope that whatever you're doing in life now is something that makes you happy! And who knows, probably the future holds another grand story like this one to us poor mortals.

Much love,

Temp

This was magnificent, incredible. It's poetry, a metaphor for love. I loved the tests by the guardians, that's what I expect from them. I expect that type of loyalty and protectiveness. I've never loved Mamoru like I love your Mamoru. He was so beautifully human. thank you for this story.

This is amazing, absolutely amazing. Emotional, intense, beautifully-crafted. I stand in awe of you. I couldn't have stopped reading this if my kitchen caught on fire.

Thank you for writing. It's a reward for me to be able to read it.

Hands down best SM story EVER! No joke, i've read this story before and loved and each time i come upon it again...BEST STORY EVER!

That was unbelievable. I just- there are no words. There is so much evoked emotion in me I think I'm going to burst. Every single piece of that was enthralling, spellbinding, captivating...exquisite. I was in so deep at every moment; there were times when my heart was actually clenching with joy and anxiety and desperation and I couldn't breathe. Especially with the dialogue. There were a few places when Mamoru would speak ("O gods of my fathers" and his words to Rei about his soul affected me most deeply), and the words coming out of his mouth had that peculiar ancient infusion of power that- the absolute glory of it left me shaking. The syntax, the diction, everything.

And the interaction with the sailors- Almighty God. Every single one of them was so real I could see their faces in my waking eyes. And the plot entire- phenomenal. Every detail was so perfect, from the salamander to the whole coronation process to the Senshi providing tests to each suitor and...just everything. His three desires were so perfect, and his reasons and beliefs were so astonishingly real- I felt everything he felt as he stood there bared before the world. Beautiful.

Even the end- as I first read it, I was frustrated that we didn't get to spend more time with Mamoru and Usagi now that they'd finally been reuinited, but after...I was really grateful for it. If we'd been left with Usagi and Mamoru, I swear I would have been overcome with emotion. The light comedy really helped to ease the emotional release- there were some points when I had to look away from the page to compose myself because I couldn't bear to miss a single word.

I am awestruck. You've raised the bar so impossibly high- this is my new standard for everything I read- not just online, but in the books I pick up. I am awestruck.

Thank you, thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this beauty with us.

Amazing! truly amazing, unlike most fanfics which dismiss the issue of power as "glittery and sparkly" this one delves into it deeper issues of discipline and control.

I love your interpretation of Mamoru, who is still kind, loving and strong yet not without shadows and weakness. The story flows with eloquence and moves effortlessly moment to moment. Truly deserving of the time spent reading it.