Reviews for Losing what you love the most
Guest 10/8/12 . chapter 8
Finish?
Monnie32 3/17/12 . chapter 8
Aww so sweet, gave me goose bumps
jenny crum 3/17/12 . chapter 8
I loved this update, I loved the conversation between Pen and Fran and the way she asked Pen to call her mom (amazing).

I loved it that she told Pen about her relationship with Dereks dad and everything that they went through, it made Pen see that she and Derek can make it together.

They love each other so completely and I can't wait for the next update
Kimd33 3/17/12 . chapter 8
I loved Fran story. It shows her you can overcome anything. My sister's boyfriend mom actually suggested that she abort her baby. His mom is racist. She doesnt like black people. It is ashame in 2012 it still exist. I told to tell him. He can visit, but she doesn't want her child around his mother. You should never send your child where they are not wanted.
Lenika08 1/29/12 . chapter 7
que hable que hablee! :D
jenny crum 1/28/12 . chapter 7
Awesome update, I love how he was telling her what he sees in her, that made her see that he really loves her.

I can't wait for more
Monnie32 1/28/12 . chapter 7
Update soon, pls
LoveforPenandDerek 1/28/12 . chapter 6
perfect chapter
jenny crum 1/28/12 . chapter 6
Awesome update, I am glad that he finally told her that he loves her and I definitely can't wait for the next update
LoveforPenandDerek 12/17/11 . chapter 5
glad he confessed, even if the timing is bad
LoveforPenandDerek 12/17/11 . chapter 4
glad hotch got through to him
LoveforPenandDerek 12/17/11 . chapter 3
good twist
Kimd33 12/17/11 . chapter 5
I bet that got her blood pressure up.
Kimd33 12/17/11 . chapter 4
All he needed was some encouragement.
jenny crum 12/17/11 . chapter 5
AAHHHH man, what a place to stop it, he finally tells her that he loves her (oh yeah oh yeah).

I can't wait for more
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