"By the Valar, Aragorn, so beautiful," Yep... ;p

hm not sure if i really approve of fics where aragorn is unfaithful, its better wen ppl pretend he was never betrothed at all. however i do like this fic tho i would like more decription of halbarad's features so i can build a better image. rita x

Amy..you are a great writer don't let any other asshole tell you different this is an extremly sweet story

Wow. You are a very good writer, and my only suggestion is to try to write in a 3rd person point of view.

Very good story, screw all else who say it isn't. I love it, please write more NOW! Great stuff...
But, um... who is Halbarad?

Oooh... fire/passion parallelism. Very good. You also pull off the second person format well. Not many can do that...

Question, not to offend or anything because your writing is pretty good(taking out the shock factor) but how do/can you write this?

Damnit, why can't I remember who Halbarad is? Stupid mental blocks. Beautiful as always as far of the poetic prose, and don't let the idiots grind you down.

I loved this, Amy. No matter what anyone else says. It's a wonderful piece of work. Please keep writing.

Please stop writing stories like this about LotR. If you want to write some erotic stories, fine. But rather than demean a fantastic story can you come up with your own characters, surroundings and plot?

What IS it with you and this junk? Keep it to yourself! You've got talent, but you're wasting it on this "writing"...if it can be called that.

well, it is nicely written with much talent. but...my poor Sragorn, gay? i think not. oh, man...Aragorn? he's not gay, he's too kingly, and gracous, and into Arwen & Eowyn to possibly be gay.

bgfd