That was amazing. I love how it all came together. Another great chapter :)

omg this chapter was absolutley flawless!

excellent writing

"kisses all the feelings he's had bottled up inside since he was old enough to understand them into her skin,"

*starts slow clap*

and that kids, is how you define EPIC LOVE.

this was wonderfully written. really poetic and flowery-but-not-too-flowery.

AWWW 3

Aw, this is so cute! Chapters three, five, and six were definitely my favorites. I love Finchel stories with kids. Great job!

Perfection doesn't even begin to describe this. Absolutely amazing :)

Aww too cute! Flawless from beginning to end :)

omg so beautiful. yay for the tree house.

your writing style is beautiful! i absolutely love your one-shots, and this particular drabble is so wonderful. the way you write finn is just so perfectly in character, and the interaction between ava and rachel was adorable.

also, this one line: "He loves this weather, loves the way the clouds cloak the sun and the way the rain falls like tears" ... very pretty :) love it.

God I am SO in love with these one-shots!

keep those chapters rollin in

How I LOVE Finchel.

Perfect. Marriage. Proposal. Wow-totally wish I'd thought of that. And Ryan Murphy and Co. let Finchel stay together and show their lives in 4 or 5 years, he should propose just like that. Perfect.

(I'm grading 8th grade research essays and they are awful, so I'm grading one and then rewarding myself with reading one chapter of this story. Damn, here comes ANOTHER Adolf Hitler paper.)