It's a sad poem of how Yugi feels about Tea and Yami being together. I hope you update soon.

WTH?!?! i love ure poem (really, its the best i've read in a while)...but its not fair how yugi dies for tea jus cuz she (or it 4 all i care) loves yami! i mean, that a horrible way to die! *sniff*...poor poor lil yugi... i wish he rests in peace...

i like it! its very origanal! it has character...

You've stuck me again! Its beautiful!

THAT was very cute! Awww...... yeah, I wouldn't wanna be in Tea's place. I mean, your best friend is in love with you, yet you like his best friend(sorta)??? I mean, how weird is that??? It's not fair, I tell ya, It's just NOT fair. Then again, if I had the opportunity, I would switch places with Tea in an instant! Ok, now I'm babbling, this is what I do when I'm on sugar highs! YAY!! well, um, yeah, I better go now. See ya! ~me

*sob* that was *sniffle* beautiful! waaaaa. *flicks away tears* that was really good. hope i find more of your fanfics!! ^.^

Sweet Poem..

nice. i liked it ^^

good story, if fact all your storys are good

That was very cute and sweet. Good job!

Sweet, poor Yugi sounds so sad....I like it much ^^

That was very nice there Yugi.(aww!he has a poetry side of him)anyways...I don't think that poem was to short...I liked it! Very nicly done, now I can see why in the fanfics I red that was yours have so many rhyme in it.=D

wow

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...This is so sweet! *wipes away tears* Good job!

hmm... you know I think this would have been a much better poem if it didn't rhyme... personally I feel that rhyming poems son't suit angsty or dramatic stuff and more for little kids or adults looking for a laugh.