It's a sad poem of how Yugi feels about Tea and Yami being together. I hope you update soon.

WTH? i love ure poem (really, its the best i've read in a while)...but its not fair how yugi dies for tea jus cuz she (or it 4 all i care) loves yami! i mean, that a horrible way to die! *sniff*...poor poor lil yugi... i wish he rests in peace...

i like it! its very origanal! it has character...

You've stuck me again! Its beautiful!

THAT was very cute! Awww... yeah, I wouldn't wanna be in Tea's place. I mean, your best friend is in love with you, yet you like his best friend(sorta)? I mean, how weird is that? It's not fair, I tell ya, It's just NOT fair. Then again, if I had the opportunity, I would switch places with Tea in an instant! Ok, now I'm babbling, this is what I do when I'm on sugar highs! YAY! well, um, yeah, I better go now. See ya! me

*sob* that was *sniffle* beautiful! waaaaa. *flicks away tears* that was really good. hope i find more of your fanfics! .

Sweet Poem..

nice. i liked it

good story, if fact all your storys are good

That was very cute and sweet. Good job!

Sweet, poor Yugi sounds so sad...I like it much

That was very nice there Yugi.(aww!he has a poetry side of him)anyways...I don't think that poem was to short...I liked it! Very nicly done, now I can see why in the fanfics I red that was yours have so many rhyme in it.D

wow

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...This is so sweet! *wipes away tears* Good job!

hmm... you know I think this would have been a much better poem if it didn't rhyme... personally I feel that rhyming poems son't suit angsty or dramatic stuff and more for little kids or adults looking for a laugh.