I feel both sad and honored to read such a moving tale. Please continue to honor fanfiction with your stories. Thank-you.I nearly cried when I found out how Jack's present colided with his younger self. I love the appoarch you took with this tale. Thank-you.

Hm. I like this. Especially the fact that he allows himself no name in this 'time between times'.

Thanks for sharing this. )

Beautiful job.

That was awesome! Sad and sweet! I loved it!

That's really sad...

Perfect! Nicely done.

I enjoyed this very much, although there was a bit of awkward phrasing in your work.

beautifully written.

not only was it logical in the time travel aspect, it was true to the character and a very enjoyable read.

thank you.

Oh, that's so depressing. But very good

Awww... ::sniffles:: Sad, but very very good. And, I really like the idea behind it, sad as it would be for poor Jack.

Aww! Jack teaching Chibi Jack how to fold the paper cricket, I like that! How sad, though, tears at the heartstrings to see poor Jack unable to spare his younger self from such pain, to speak to his father and mother like that. *sobs*

Very well written, did very well with Chibi Jack, hee! Perhaps a sequel's in order? ;P

how sweeeeet! _

Aw (Tears begin to well up) That was so sweet and beautiful and sad (Cries waterfalls) Oh don't look at me, ahhhhh (Runs crying from comp)

Rae: o_O Ah yeah

A lovely piece! Well thought out and written. Great job!

PUH-LEASE tell me your gonna write more! DO IT! THE EMPRESS COMANDS YOU (heh, i'm starting to sound like OMWOS _;)