That was fun.

Harry actually laughed. "Oh! You mean the fact that he's a total and incomprehensible asshole?"

"Yes!" John said. "Well, no. But that's how I thought you'd see him."

"I do! It's fantastic!"

This is definitely my favourite bit. Especially the last comment.

"As I seem to recall it, your previous definitions of 'fine' have left something to be desired." That was my favorite, though I loved the whole chapter and its bromance.

I'm not leaving a real review, because you're whole demanour for demanding and blackmailing your readers is...as Sherlock had said in the first episode: your behaviour is putting me off. Usually, an author is writing a story because he/she wants to and not for how much reactions he/she can get from others.

As for the story, it's okay, but it doesn't stand out from others and the Watson in your story is rather out of character. He's too snarky.

found a typo."How could be make Sherlock understand that he wanted to be out there with him?"- could He make

the story is ok and managed to keep my attention until the last chapter. your sherlock sounds nicely in character when he is speaking, though i think your john is a little too snarky and fast in his conclusions and arguments .

i dont like it when authors beg for reviews like this. a story should be written because you want to write it, want to share it. it is just childish and not nice to blackmail your readers into leaving reviews...think about always makes an author happy, of course(im no exception here) but it should be given voluntarily.

a typo again

"so perhaps you should stop worrying about something a Band-Aid will fix, and do you job!"- youR job

found a typo.

"You mean a lot more to the world that I do, Sherlock."-thaN Ido

Harry actually laughed. "Oh! You mean the fact that he's a total and incomprehensible asshole?"

"Yes!" John said. "Well, no. But that's how I thought you'd see him."

"I do! It's fantastic!"

Because usually Harry is seen as mean and rude, and it made me laugh :)

Finally, John was tired of waiting. "Never do what?"

"Offer to die for me."

I like it because it's genius.

Nice work with this story - your characterisations are great. Loved the interaction between John and Sherlock throughout.

Ah! I see now, and I must admit I feel like a bit of a jerk. Sorry.

For what it's worth, the preview for your One-Shot looks great, and my intention wasn't to belittle your writing or anything like that. It just really bothers me when I see someone with obvious talent do something that, to me, seems like a big mistake.

So. Sorry about the misunderstanding.

Oh gosh, I love it. I love this preview and I want more... more, more, more and more! I'm such a child... haha I can wait though dear. But you have definitely gotten me interested. I loved every bit of it. Their own language, brilliant! I can see this whole scene folding out and can even hear John calling Sherlock a git :)

The last couple lines were my favourite in this chapter. Sherlock and John banter always cracks me up. :) Great story!

Okay, look. I'm really sorry I have to do this, because the rest it was amazing. But.

"The statement was so shocking that for a moment John simply sat there, letting it sink in. But then he realized that he had known this all along."

No.

Introspection does not happen that fast. That is much, much too abrupt for anything like good pacing. You do not suddenly realize something that you've been denying/unaware of in the span of one sentence.

This is a good example of how one moment of bad pacing can ruin an otherwise great story.

A great finish. I really enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.

N'awww! Such an adorable ending, I loved it. That final exchange was perfect. But this "I'm more than willing to risk your friendship and trust for the sake of your life." would probably have to win the prize. Oh, Sherlock.

Fabulous, well done! :D