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Rogue-Lu
2004-04-06
ch 18,
abuseI notice how you twisted the last words from, "They lived happily ever after" to "They were a happy family and would be forever" I laughed ^_^
I think you should have put more of Gau and Relm in there. They were great! Heck, the whole thing was great!
sodapoppp
2003-05-26
ch 1,
abuseWHE!! You finished! Thanks for reviewing my story to inform me. Otherwise I would never have known. ^^;; My new e-mail is xxgood4UXX@hotmail.com. Er..thanks for reminding me about that, too.. it should be changed by tomorrow on my profile. LOVE THIS STORY!! I actually would prefer both Simon and Locke dying. I love Terra angst. o_O I'm really mean to Terra..
yuuhi
2003-04-05
ch 18, anon.
abuseI'm slowly reading more and more of your work, I'm finding it nice. This one made me download "Love is a Battlefield".

I'm actually curious if there's a signifigance to Setzer that I either missed, or was intended but then not written into the story. Terra noticed he wasn't in her premonition of the battlefield, or the battlefield itself, and when I heard the name "Solitaire" I thought there was a connection.

I liked the overall meaning of The Power of Love here.
GG Crono
2003-04-03
ch 18,
abuseLike I;ve told you before, this SO isn't my kind of story, but I enjoyed it. ^_^
The Rushing Wind
2003-04-02
ch 18,
abuseI loved the ending, but...hmm...I'm just disapointed that the story is over!! :) I enjoyed it very much, and I hope you write lots of other stories (can't wait to read them all! :)
Gauy
2003-04-01
ch 18,
abuseI HAVE to review this story. First of all, *blushes* thanks again for mentioning me and stuff. I really enjoy doing it, not because it bugs you, but ... I dunno, I just do. Anyway. it turned out to be a GREAT Story. Of course, you already knew that. You wrote the whole thing. Spending almost a whole year on a story should bring lots of reviews. And I hope it will. I'll try my best so you will later. At least it turned out all happy in the end. * happy sway thingy * LOL! I'm so weird. Well, how's my rambling? Annoying yet? Hope not. Won't be much more. Hm, I love this chapter the most. It actually has Simon's past, so yeah. And it's so detailed, I love it. Great job. Can't wait to see you other major story done. Well, I think that's enough for me, so bye. So you tomorrow. :)
By the way, you HAVE to do a story on your characters sometime, even if it's not soon. Please? For me? And your fans? Come one people, ask for a story with her original characters.
* crowds begins chanting * Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Um, nevermind me. Just carry on and do it whenever you feel like it. :)
The Rushing Wind
2003-03-27
ch 17,
abuseNO HE CAN'T DIE NO! YOU CAN'T LEAVE US LIKE THIS! NO! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Gauy!
2003-03-26
ch 17, anon.
abuseGood! Good! Do more! NOW! Get it up quick. I HAVE to find out who Simon, or Kind Diamond, really is. So hurry with the next chapter.
sodapoppp
2002-12-20
ch 14,
abuseUpdate. New chapter. Now.

Umm..please? :)

I LOVE THIS STORY!! LOCKE/TERRA!! WOO HOO!!
*cough* I mean, Chapter 14, so sad, sad, *sniff*...I have a creepy feeling that Kefka and Simon are related in a way. Am I right? Its just a guess! Pleeeeeeeaaaaase continue!!! I don't care if you haven't updated for a couple months!!! *sob*
violettegal345
2002-11-18
ch 14, anon.
abuseno no no no no ... NO! it has to be a dream... that ... is just too horrible to think about. *shudders* it was written so well that i thought i was there *shivers* and...it wasnt too pleasant... no offense! it was great... but so many losses... so many deaths.. *sniffle* omg... itz amazing.. but so ....i cant find a word... ^_^ keep writing!!!
Andromeda Highwind
2002-11-18
ch 14, anon.
abuseGorey battle...death...dying...hmm, tends to make things interesting. Can't wait to hear more!

^_^
Golden Flame
2002-11-12
ch 14, anon.
abuseI thought it was really good. Keep up the hard work!
Golden Flame
2002-11-09
ch 13, anon.
abuseIt was really good. I really enjoyed reading your fanfic. I hope you come out with another chapter soon!
Golden Flame
2002-11-09
ch 13, anon.
abuseIt was really good. I really enjoyed reading your fanfic. I hope you come out with another chapter soon!
The Rushing Wind
2002-10-31
ch 13,
abuseOOOoooo, the plot thickens...

Update soon! Though I am a rather die-hard Locke-Celes fan, this is great! I can't wait to read more!
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