I like it! Such a shame that you don't update anymore. I thought, "people are gonna ship Bobby and Jack", during the movie I watched a few hours ago. Didn't you feel his protectiveness over him?

You're a good writer, but I think the transition from lost brother to all-of-a-sudden lover, is fast... I also wonder what the others think of their lovey dovey public affection.

Wha! I love this story. I always get happy chills down my spine when there are mercer babies baking (snickers) i cant believe i wrote that. Please update soon. I really wanna know what hap;pens next!

My goodness these two bone like rabbits...they just keep going and going...the story is pretty interesting..I like it soo far... I just have one tip/criticism...when doing dialogue, each time a new person speaks, start a new paragraph. It just makes everything a nit easier to follow... And again nice story... Keep it up.. I want more.

PCE&LVE

Blue

Awesome beginning. Please continue on writing:):)