Okay, first off, it's really nice to see more Stan fics. You're absolutely right in that the fandom just seems him as boring or just as someone to ship with someone "more interesting". YGO made me really care about what happened to Stan and it's a shame there aren't more fics about the gap between YGO and Ass Burgers. I also really like that you do explore the different relationships between characters-I've not seen really anyone look into how Stan and Sharon are together. I think my favourite bit would have to be Cartman forcefeeding Stan the frosting, which was really funny. Actually, some aspects of this fic reminds me of Abnormally Average by NoseBridgePinch, which I've seen you review. Just wondering if it inspired you since the premises are similar, although different contextually with Stan becoming self-concious of his personality and the other guys trying to reassure him.

However, if I were to give you something to work on, it would be characterization. Stan might be Cartman's favourite but I think it's more a matter of him being the one he hates least than actually liking him. Kyle and Kenny seem about right (Kenny doesn't do much but that's canon anyway) but Stan just seems a tad too young. The show does portray them as a lot more mature than nine and it makes sense Stan might be feeling insecure after the divorce but even so, he doesn't seem to be acting nine. To be frank, he's pretty babyish, especially in response to the kitten and Sharon (I'm curious about what happened to Sparky-did they have to leave him behind when they moved or something?), which made it quite hard to read.

I don't want you to get discouraged or anything-when this fic worked, it worked well. It's just something you could work at and I look forward to seeing what you write in the future.

I loved this so much! So cute, and I really liked how you added in Stan being upset about being nothing but average and "boring" to fans. I loved the part with the kitten too, absolutely sweet! I got annoyed with Randy and Sharon getting back together too. It all seemed too rush, and Stan was ready for the changes D: Again, I love the story :)

A fantastic piece of work.

It was enjoyable to see how kyle went through the experiments with stan and slowly remind him of everything. i wished this was the next episode but obviously wasn't. woulda made a delightful, tear jerker of an episode :)

well done!

Awesome story. Love how the boys helped Stan get back to normal and their compliments to him were great. Stan is nowhere near boring, he's the best. Pussy or not Stan is still the best SP character.

Loved the gift he got at the end.