 Yami Maleci 3/20/06 . chapter 2you must update soon! I'm diying to find out what happened to Nagi-sama!
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kai |
 bffimagine 11/1/05 . chapter 2Haha anyone worried about Crawford's condition? Well,you shouldn't just bluntly TELL us how he's doing. Let us angst a little in our fangirly ways. |
 zelda-1313 6/29/05 . chapter 2good fic. plzz write more i like it and what to know what happenes. thnk god crawfors alive. i love him in an odd kinda ... masocistic way. so fun to touture. plzz update asap. do not make me go chibi and cry on u. ill get u all wet and i dont think u wan that... do you? |
 The Chaotic Ones 11/17/04 . chapter 2Nah, we're too upset with Crawford to realy care if he's alive. This is REALY good! _ please write more soon, this is cool. |
 Chou ni Natte 10/14/04 . chapter 2This is an awesome fic! Not too OOC at all. I'm looking forward to reading more, keep it up! P |
 The Weaver Atropos 7/15/04 . chapter 2No way...it's Omi, isn't it? Omi's going to rescue Nagi? *tear* And my Schu-Schu's so purty...! I LOVE IT! |
 Hellcat81 6/7/04 . chapter 2Hm, did Omi came for the rescue? Please update asap! |
 aionwatha 5/24/04 . chapter 2waited so long for that one! glad you finally updated! please update more soon?
aion |
 Kati 5/21/04 . chapter 2 Well. I was curious when you will update this fic. So it will be SchuKen? I’m happy (never enough of this pairing). But I hope another chap will come sooner then this. I like it so far, so update quick, please! |
 methodic madness 5/20/04 . chapter 2Ooh, a new Weiss story. And not a bad one at all so far. I am enjoying this fic so far, even though the full plot hasn't come to light yet. Your writing style is very smooth, and I like how you describe things, such as the sounds the "prisoner" (Nagi?) hears once he's in the darkness. There are only a few rough spots here and there from a grammar/word choice POV - nothing I'm going to harp about or anything. ;) I do have a question for you - I noticed two of you are writing this together. My friend and I are also writing a WK fic together, and if you have any advice on how to write a fic when two different people are working on it separately, I'd love to hear it. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
MM |
 Vincent Severus Mycroft 5/16/04 . chapter 1So far I think this story is great. Please continue it. Personally, I LOVE stories that involve Schwartz and Weiss having to work together. I look forward to more chapters. Please continue. |
 Kati 5/8/04 . chapter 1 I have a little question... Will you write something more? I would like to read it. I'm sore you can think up something interesting. |
 omymelodynelson 4/5/04 . chapter 1continue this, or I'll bite you. |
 Katana 3/22/04 . chapter 1 This is great! I really think you should continue it! Please come back to it... *puppy dog eyes* I'm sure people will find it again, and more people will start to read it if you continue!
Katana |
 Pyro-99 12/23/03 . chapter 1 Of course its worth finishing plz keep going! |