   Master of Chronicles 8/13/10 . chapter 7Ah, a true masterpiece of love and tradegy. The best, not to mention one of the few, Besty/Scott romance I've ever read. The story is complete, fitting well into the AoA. The characters a true to form and the writing and dialogue isn't too weighty nor too cliched.
Thank you very much for your work |
| araym 11/2/05 . chapter 11 hi. i just read your story and i must say that i liked it very much (especially beginning - slave pens & cyke's quarters). it's too bad that fanfics in AoA are so rare. i hope you can write another :) |
| Ghan 8/23/05 . chapter 11 Nice. There are several grammatical errors and the fic would have been better with the chapters compressed, and thus individually longer. Despite these criticisms, I enjoyed the story, particularly your writing of Scott and Betsy, which I thought was a high point. |
| Amelia 5/15/02 . chapter 6 I don't want scott or bets to die! |
| Amelia 5/11/02 . chapter 5 I don't want alex to kill scott! More please! |
| Amelia 5/6/02 . chapter 4 More please! |
| Amelia 5/3/02 . chapter 3 More Please! |
| arin 5/3/02 . chapter 3 Oooooooo...very nice! Keep writing, okay? |
| Amelia 4/30/02 . chapter 2 More please! |
| Gouki 4/30/02 . chapter 2 This shows promise. I like how you go into descriptions of Betsy's emotions without getting sappy. Keep it up. |
| Amelia 4/27/02 . chapter 1 Yay scott/betsy! More please! |
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