So angsty and so good, I would have loved an h/c scene like this.
"You were tired before everything" -so harsh and so true, poor boys.
"I watch over him, not moving, even though Lucifer has decided to sing Gilbert and Sullivan's greatest hits. I don't move when the walls melt, or when the claws tear at my skin." -just makes me love Sam so much for looking out for his brother.
Wonderful piece, thank you so much.

Awesome as are all your hurt!Dean's!

I really loved your story, always love hurt Dean and caring Sam, but Sam's inner thoughts in this were written so masterfully. The close moments just felt so real. And loved the memory when he was young and Dean was holding his hand and how he holds Dean's hand through everything he sees in his head. Great writing!

i like the finger flip lol

Brilliant Muffy. I love your little extra scenes between eps. I much prefer stories set where the story in the show is now, so I look forward to yours. Yor writing is great, and you really have their characters down. Thanks for writing.

I guess I didn't review this since it's letting me do it now. *snort*

Very enjoyable! Always love the way you do some hurt!Dean and caring!Sammy. Always , ALWAYS love me some brotherly angst and schmoop. Satisfies a specific itch for me.

Nice one. :)

Poignant...touching...loved it. Thanks

I liked your take on a scene that could have been in The Girl Next Door. I loved the dialogue. I also loved how you described how the boys express emotions. It really showed your understanding of Sam and Dean. Excellent job!

Loved this so much. Very beautifully written :D

love it! :)

*wipes eyes*

Aw Muffy, you did it again.

We can't be the only two people in the world who see all these side moments can we?

We need to let Sera and Ben know that while whumpage is great, we really need more brother-love-moments. Yeah, brother-hugs too. I would love to have an entire ep of somehow letting the boys just get it all out; the love, the anger, the LOVE! Okay, enough fantasy.

Thanks for a lovely Monday morning surprise. Better than tea and pumpkin muffin! :) Always a pleasure to visit your playground!

Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous as always sweetie...ohh, these boys break my heart!

*hugs*

Mandy

Good story.

Aw. I loved this. You made my heart happy. Love you bunches!

Love it! I am enjoying everyone's tags to this season! Great season so far don't you agree? Love the story!