| Reviews for Family First |
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TinaraXx 10/20/11 . chapter 6honestly made me cry. I felt it went too quickly for my liking, but thats just me. maybe slow it down and give it a bit more information about why this is happening, what made them find out ( eg you said their parents car accident) and how bad is it. I like! :) |
AsandCastle103 10/15/11 . chapter 5Another amazing chapter. Poor Jo and Jay. Keep it up. :) |
AsandCastle103 10/14/11 . chapter 4Another amazing chapter. Keep up the great work. :) |
AsandCastle103 10/9/11 . chapter 1Great start, i hope u continue. :) |