honestly made me cry. I felt it went too quickly for my liking, but thats just me. maybe slow it down and give it a bit more information about why this is happening, what made them find out ( eg you said their parents car accident) and how bad is it. I like! :)

Another amazing chapter. Poor Jo and Jay. Keep it up. :)

Another amazing chapter. Keep up the great work. :)

Great start, i hope u continue. :)