Well, it's taken me a long time to find a Tenchi fic that draws such similar conclusions to the ones I did while watching the show! Like how Ryoko is also a goddess' warrior, and can make the Light Hawk wings... And like how Naja should be in a story somewhere, even if it's just a disguise! Probably this story won't be finished, since it was last updated six years ago...but I wanted to leave a review anyway, saying that I wish you'd write more. :D

Oh no! I really love this story! I wish you would have continued it! Sad... I want to see what happens

Really cool... But Ayeka can't marry Tenchi!

Hope you keep writting this Great story.

It was an okay story up to this, but since you revealed that Yosho/Ryoko thing, it just ruined my appetite to read any further. Ryoko's love all of sudden just don't seem as deep as they did before, and instead she comes off as whiny.

O NO! That can't possibly happen! Tenchi and Ryoko got to stay together

continue!

Sorry it has been a while. Good work on this one Ja-ne (_)

BETHROTHED! you must continue this! it has taken you long enough to update a new chapter but all in all I would say it was definitely worth every second. Now is Tenchi going to tell Seto that he is already engaged and that his wedding will be in two days and that he's expecting a child? You really turned the tables of this story. But I hope you will continue soon.

Ja!

Ayumi

*rolls eyes* Is it really necessary to keep throwing obstacles in front of Tenchi & Ryoko, when it's so obvious that neither of them is going to be with anyone else. Besides, Ayeka's got Zephr. :)

This was an excellent chapter. A very enjoyable one indeed. Anyway the four women chasing Tenchi around like that was hilarious! Also I liked the store incident, the people were snobs though. (not Ryoko, Sasami, or Ryo-Ohki!) I love this continue!

In the immortal words of Scooby-doo: 'Ruh-roh Raggy!' _

What ever is our young prince to do, seeing as he has just discovered he has another fiance, and why do I feel he is not going to be happy about it? I like the inclusion of GXP herein, well done.

On another note, I ask you this: will Tenchi stick to his guns and wed only Ryoko, as he has intended, or will he be badgered into taking Ayeka as a bride, and share his heart, which more than likely would not be done willingly? With all that Ryoko has suffered through, she deserves to be the sole recipient of Tenchi's affections. Also, what will Ayeka's reaction be, seeing as Tenchi has already given his heart to Ryoko? Will she make him feel so guilt that he accepts the propsal out of pity and self-loathing?

That rant aside, I like the use of , and it seems that our heroine has inadvernatntly stumbled into his clutches...this probably will not bode well for her or our hero.

Either way, please do continue this fic, and if at all possible, update a little sooner (i know, i know, i'm one to talk...4 chapters of daydreams in six months_). Until then, please do carry on.

William Nichols

Oh, my. Doesn't this seem familiar? Hey, it's cool. I'm very curious to see where this goes, considering Tenchi's already engaged. I'll bet Ryoko throws a royal fit.

Ah, ha ha ha! Aeka's revenge! She and Washu would have Ryoko down there for a hundred years playing dress-up!

If Ryoko is The Great Pumpkin, is Tenchi Charlie Brown?

A great and exciting chapter to say the least but a small warning. Don't put too many characters into a story because they can confusee your readers who don't know who they are and sometimes the author assumes things that aren't true to the character. Beleive me I know of what I speak. Otherwise, have fun writing the next one!

dennisud

Well weitten. I can't wait to read the rest of the story when you finish it. I hope Ryoko ends up happy she deserves it.