|Reviews for Aliens in the attic My version!|
| The What-If Writer 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Hm...just a bit of constructive criticism here;
The spelling and grammar is fine, but spacing out and taking new lines is part of punctuation.
Keep in mind that every time a new person speaks, you take a new line to begin the speech-marks, no exceptions. It makes it easier to read if you take new lines as well, and you can tell people part more.
Apart from that, a good start.
| abigleave 9/30/12 . chapter 1
i like it update already will you i hate it when people dont bother anymore, puts me right of reading !
| RAPTORGIRL 7/20/12 . chapter 1
can you please update and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let Tazor and Razor hook up or atlest have Tazor kiss Razor or admit his feelings for her and agien PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE with a cherry on top! now who agrees with me?
| Super8cary 7/3/12 . chapter 1
awesome! Are Lee and Art in it?
| chrnarnia3 6/4/12 . chapter 1
| Inazcus 11/26/11 . chapter 1
good sooooooo far but update already!
| mim 10/9/11 . chapter 1
cool wadad cool
| Angel Lovely Rose 10/9/11 . chapter 1
sorry everyone if it's cut stupid comp is always doing that.