HOT! Cant wait to see what happens next update soon

Good start! The characters are believable and endearing. I look forward to see where you take this.

wow. that's all i can say. well written...so much so i have reread both chapters a couple of times-LOL

thank you for sharing.

Good, it would be better if you added some spacing and paragraphs. It would make it easier to follow. But it is very hot.

wow!

very hot!

OH...MY...GOD! The things I could say right now. One, that was HOT! Two, that was CRAZY! And three, I definitely didn't see what Ziva did coming. That was some crazy ass smut. I lvoed it!

Oh My God! That was soooooo hot! You had my brain so far in the sex place that I dont think I will be able to get out for another few hours. Haha. This was a great story and I am so looked forward to more. I loved the sexual detail, that's ALWAYS a plus. If you read my stories youll see I know quite a bit about Tiva smut. This is quite an amazing fanfiction and I am honestly excited to read more. Don't keep me waiting for too long, please?

um, more please?

interesting start

Me like! You need to update this story! :)