Great work on this chapter. And as for not wanting to use my second idea, I'm ok with that.

Here are a few more ideas you can use if you like them enough.

1. After Bloo goes to jail. While most of his friends do agree that he did deserve it, they do feel sorry for him. Except Mr. Herriman.

Mr. Herriman: Hopefully, This will teach Bloo a lesson once and for all. And now that Bloo has been locked up, we can pay off all the damages he has cause.

2.

The narrator: The only comfort Bloo were the small acts of Kindness give to by Jazz Fenton, sympathetic warden's daughter.

gives Bloo a truth serum to make sure his story he told her was true.

Jazz: Well he be self, trouble making jerk but he's innocent. There's got to be a way to get him out of jail with out me getting to trouble.

That when she came up with a clever plan.

4. When Bloo is being chased by the police

Bloo: You never take me alive coppers!

5. At the very end of Bloo's story, becuase of Bloo's recklessness, the government made new laws that made get liscens before they can drive a car or fly a plane.

Nice work so far, but son, you really need to work a bit on your spelling and grammer. And also, maybe you shouldn't smush the paragraphs together. It would make the stories a little easier to read.

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, superb job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Now, I have just two more suggestions:

1. At an appropriate point of the second story (toward the end), Blossom can actually defeat the Heartless Bandit (though just a few seconds too late to save Bubbles), using a combination of her super-powers and high-tech ghostbusting gear (the latter invented by Dexter).

and 2. Toward the very end of the second story in this fanmake, it can be mentioned "Even though Bubbles was out of the running due to the Heartless Bandit, Blossom still lost out because Jimmy refused to believe her claims that she had absolutely nothing to do with it (even though, apart from warning Bubbles about the Heartless Bandit in the first place, she actually didn't [even if, in the actual story, the Headless Horseman was actually Bram Bones in a flimsy disguise, well, Blossom has too many standards for that sort of stuff, even if she IS in the Bram role]). Ultimately, Jimmy ended up marrying Cindy Vortex, but don't feel too bad for Blossom - for she ended up with the town's other genius (who had a sizeable crush on HER, ironically enough, but didn't have his affections requited until Blossom lost Jimmy for good) - a man named Dexter."

That is, of course, assuming you like the ideas enough to use them. If not, I DO profusely apologize in advance and still look forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Great start, JusSonic!

Blossom: Too bad I'll be probably scaring Bubbles away, though. Maybe even... (gulps fearfully) kill her if I were that monster.

Me: Hey, fear not, Blossom. It's only a mystery.

Dexter: And I still prefer being Blossom's true love.

Me: Me too, Dexter, but hey, it's JusSonic's fic. Anyway...

All three: Please continue!

In Cree's case don't you mean before she turned evil?

Great start to this story

As for a suggestion

1) When Bloo sees the car he could mention the time he took a joyride in the Foster's Home bus and had Wilt cover for him and Mac just in case Frankie discovered the missing bus.

Nice start to the fanmake. Bloo and Toad are alike in soo many ways. Both are immature, selfish at times, wild, unpredictable, but also quite loveble at times. And the fact that you made Harriman, Frankie, Mac, Wilt, Coco and Ed all their friends keeps it true to the story. Can't wait for more.

Sorry, but I made a mistake with one of my suggestions.

1. Jazz fenton can play the sympathetic warden's daughter who who come up with the plan (with Yoshi pretending to be Bloo's Grandma) help Bloo escape from prison.

2. And for a twist for the second story in this fanmake, Blossom ends up Marrying Dexter, thus allowing Bubbles to marry Jimmy.

Great work on this story. Here are 2 ideas for the story

1. Jazz fenton can play the sympathetic warden's daughter who who come up with the plan (with pretending to be Bloo Grandma) help Bloo escape from prison.

2. And for a twist for the second story in this fanmake, Blossom ends up Marrying Dexter, thus allowing Bubbles to marry Jimmy.

Exellent start. I'. looking forward for the next chapter. Btw, who will be playing the judge?

Thanks very much for getting this story started. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, great job on the future chapter set-up. Now, I DO have a few suggestions for this:

1. At an appropriate point, somebody of your choice can comment "Bloo's manias would be a lot more tolerable if they weren't so expensive and dangerous."

2. At an appropriate point, somebody of your choice can comment "How did Bloo manage to get ahold of the deed to the mansion? I thought Madame Foster had the deed." before somebody else of your choice puts in "He must of snuck into her quarters and stolen the deed in case he needed to buy something very expensive."

3. At an appropriate point, while the weasels are having a party in the mansion, Greasy could see Psycho dancing with Sarah and comment how he wishes there was a pretty girl around for him to try his luck with."

4. At an appropriate point, Greasy can see Frankie and comment "As Pepe Le Pew (who is, by the way, a close personal friend of mine) would say "'En guarde, pigeon.'"." as he dashes off after her."

5. At an appropriate point, Judge Doom can comment "This manor is an ideal headquarters. Not only is there plenty of room, but everything I need for my weaponry to conquer and/or destroy the toon world is in easy reach." before turning to the readers and saying "Well, it makes more since for me than a simple swindle."

an appropriate point, the hero of your choice can call Judge Doom "Dominic" in order to goad him into carelessness (a reference to your "Great Mouse Detective" fanmake)

7. At an appropriate point, Blossom can comment "How come I'm cast as Bram Bones? I thought the author HATED casting heroes in villain roles and all Bram is is basically a prototype for Gaston with the only real difference between the two being that Bram actually won. Okay, there's the issue with me and Bubbles having a rivalry concerning Jimmy, I get that (even though, personally, I prefer Dexter). Still, I sure hope the author includes some sort of a twist because I HATE playing villains, especially pitted against one of my own sisters."

8. At the appropriate point, when confronted with your analogue to the Headless Horseman, Bubbles can comment "Come on. I'm supposed to be scared of THAT? I've fought and defeated MUCH worse than that more times than I care to count. Okay, most of the times, I had Blossom and Buttercup helping me, but I sitll did my share. Still, I suppose it would ruin ths script if I turned to fight."

and 9. At an appropriate point, Bubbles can try to scan your analogue of the Headless Horseman with super-vision, admitting "Well, if this is a ruse, it's a good one. I scanned that entire body from head to toe with no signs of that being a fourht-raste crook in a cheap disguise." before trying her laser vision, super-strength, super-speed and sonic power (all ineffectively) and commenting "Okay, this character is at least durable enough to take a good amount of punishment from a gal with at least Superman-level power without any visible harm. If this is a hoax, it is a REALLY good one."

That is, of course, assuming you like the ideas enough to use them. If not, I DO profusely apologize for wasting your time and still look forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.