Reviews for Twilight of the Silver Land
Chaos 6/2/13 . chapter 9
Alright, Sion passed the test :3

And let me guess : that man on the last part... Jin, perhaps? 3
MusaBakaChan 6/1/13 . chapter 9
Hey! You're not dead! :D
I don't think I've read this story before, so I read everything today :P
That was a cool idea by having Sion go on a fake mission with Lire to test her! I actually have never seen that in a story before!
Anyways, that person at the end of the chapter...was that Jin or Asin? Because Sion might've known Asin...maybe, I don't know. Or maybe she just walked in Jin's room by accident.

Update soon
CelestialFlare12th 2/20/13 . chapter 4
Amy could have used Pretty Virus, but that is cheating.
Anyway, doesn't Starlet(Sistina on us) act?, I was hoping for a fight between the two but Oh well.
I can picture Amy crying and kicking Jin around chapter 9 or rampaging as a pink dinosaur.
(Pls. let there be chapter nine)
mitsukini15 2/19/13 . chapter 8
Please Continue this it's a great story..XD
SnowSummer 2/15/13 . chapter 8
awwww arent you gonna continue this?
its a pretty cute story *w*
Deselangel 12/20/12 . chapter 8
continue please update please
Solica 8/21/12 . chapter 8
Message from my big bro: "Sedih... Ga ada yang review. Wkwkwkw"
Fata Lunevis 2/1/12 . chapter 7
Aww JinXSion is so cute together

I like how this chapter has multiple emotional scenes, not just one emotion going on throughout the whole thing

I found some grammar mistakes, but nothing to be worried about " Just try to use "a" more often.

Ex:

She gave her flower could become She gave her a flower.

Write more please!
NINJANEXofFICTION 1/30/12 . chapter 7
Score 1 for Sion! CONTINUE!
RD 1/30/12 . chapter 7
._.

just update...

(lazy to log in)
ChaosSeeker 1/27/12 . chapter 6
Me : Nah, you don't have to sorry omnious, I think this is good 3 I still can't update mine... TT
omnious 1/25/12 . chapter 6
hahaha... to be honest, this is an unfinished chapter -_-

i don't have spare time back then. Realy sorry about this .
PaperPlanesx3 1/25/12 . chapter 6
Oh my gosh.

Half of the time I was squealing like a little girl... ouo but that's a good thing.

I couldn't stop smiling, my gosh! xD

Keep up the good work. (:
Clandarrlo Slayer 1/24/12 . chapter 6
Well I got nuthin to say but good chapter, it is kinda short...
amyxjin 1/24/12 . chapter 1
awww amy will be mad if she know that her jin is falling to sion but please dont let that happen i like amy jin please
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