| Reviews for Twilight of the Silver Land |
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Chaos 6/2/13 . chapter 9 Alright, Sion passed the test :3 And let me guess : that man on the last part... Jin, perhaps? 3 |
MusaBakaChan 6/1/13 . chapter 9Hey! You're not dead! :D I don't think I've read this story before, so I read everything today :P That was a cool idea by having Sion go on a fake mission with Lire to test her! I actually have never seen that in a story before! Anyways, that person at the end of the chapter...was that Jin or Asin? Because Sion might've known Asin...maybe, I don't know. Or maybe she just walked in Jin's room by accident. Update soon |
CelestialFlare12th 2/20/13 . chapter 4Amy could have used Pretty Virus, but that is cheating. Anyway, doesn't Starlet(Sistina on us) act?, I was hoping for a fight between the two but Oh well. I can picture Amy crying and kicking Jin around chapter 9 or rampaging as a pink dinosaur. (Pls. let there be chapter nine) |
mitsukini15 2/19/13 . chapter 8Please Continue this it's a great story..XD |
SnowSummer 2/15/13 . chapter 8awwww arent you gonna continue this? its a pretty cute story *w* |
Deselangel 12/20/12 . chapter 8continue please update please |
Solica 8/21/12 . chapter 8Message from my big bro: "Sedih... Ga ada yang review. Wkwkwkw" |
Fata Lunevis 2/1/12 . chapter 7Aww JinXSion is so cute together I like how this chapter has multiple emotional scenes, not just one emotion going on throughout the whole thing I found some grammar mistakes, but nothing to be worried about " Just try to use "a" more often. Ex: She gave her flower could become She gave her a flower. Write more please! |
NINJANEXofFICTION 1/30/12 . chapter 7Score 1 for Sion! CONTINUE! |
RD 1/30/12 . chapter 7 ._. just update... (lazy to log in) |
ChaosSeeker 1/27/12 . chapter 6Me : Nah, you don't have to sorry omnious, I think this is good 3 I still can't update mine... TT |
omnious 1/25/12 . chapter 6 hahaha... to be honest, this is an unfinished chapter -_- i don't have spare time back then. Realy sorry about this . |
PaperPlanesx3 1/25/12 . chapter 6Oh my gosh. Half of the time I was squealing like a little girl... ouo but that's a good thing. I couldn't stop smiling, my gosh! xD Keep up the good work. (: |
Clandarrlo Slayer 1/24/12 . chapter 6 Well I got nuthin to say but good chapter, it is kinda short... |
amyxjin 1/24/12 . chapter 1 awww amy will be mad if she know that her jin is falling to sion but please dont let that happen i like amy jin please |