|Reviews for The FEAR Tracker|
| Skullface 12-23-1994 12/4/12 . chapter 5
This story needs more reviews than what it has after being on here for so damn long.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/21/12 . chapter 14
Again another chapter done good. I wish that my story itself could have such vocabulary, and have such a number of reviews. On a side note my friend, I have obtained aid from a beta. I hope that my own story can do well now with grammatical errors, and past and present tense. Anyways, I like yours story and I am sure that many others like it.
| WrittenWithPencils 11/21/12 . chapter 14
Trouble's brewing, I see? Well, then. How will they manage?
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/20/12 . chapter 13
I feel a somewhat small bit of pity for Carl Anderson. At least whatever wrong he had done in the past is no longer left to haunt him now. I will continue on with this story, and I am hoping for the best of this story. I don't expect a whole lot of you, only that which makes you happy with your work. Writers should love their work.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/18/12 . chapter 12
This was a good chapter, I like how you made the character 'Farah' seem mysterious until the end. I also like how you made Alma. Some writers, and I mean only 'Some' are able to get her very personality right. I like how you made Alma's some people get her right, others don't. The hard thing about a F.E.A.R. fic, is that getting the monstrous somewhat motherly like lady aka genocidal ghost's very personality done right. In this case, you did a swell job.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/17/12 . chapter 11
This was a pretty good chapter man. It gave a perspective on the survivors of the Fairport affair. I like what you did here, but also I have a question. Are these the character from your role-play? I ask because that keeps popping into my head.
But either ways I enjoy this story, and look forward to the finisher of the whole thing. Personally stories such as these that are original need more reviews and favs or other wise followers. I like this story and that is why I say this.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/11/12 . chapter 10
Cool you are adding those characters from your role play. That's pretty neat. I am going to safely guess that the Tracker is going to go and kill those people, then right? I will check out the next chapter when I can, but I have to do other matters. I really like this story, and if by and chance you get this, may we converse? If not then that is fine. But either way I really like this story.
| Alardem 11/9/12 . chapter 1
Thanks for having the courtesy to remove your 'review'. It's hard to lecture a writer on how to tell a good story when one is unable to elucidate proper suggestions, spell 'franchise' correctly, structure their sentences like a native speaker or fail to realize that they're on a fan-fiction website. That arrogance is a welcome change from the glib compliments I've been getting on my fanfics!
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/4/12 . chapter 9
I don't know what the hell this was all about, but I am going to place a wild card on saying that this all has something to do with the events that lead up to Project Origin am I right?
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/4/12 . chapter 8
Who dude what happened here, I am slightly confused? Was the Tracker going to get laid or something or was it an illusion? What was going on man?
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/4/12 . chapter 7
The part where the senator gives his speech, you need to fix a light error (Or not) for their is a " that needs to go with his speech. If you re-read this, you will know what I mean. I hope this helped, also this story is going pretty well. I hope the rest of the story plays out well.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/1/12 . chapter 6
This was a cool dynamic chapter man. I really liked the drama to this. Listening to the F.E.A.R. theme music to the first game, while reading and imagining out that scene where the tracker was killing those Marauders, was just played out so well. I think you did a good job. And I am happy to see that the Tracker is at least as bit human and not a total killing machine.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 10/21/12 . chapter 4
Taking photos of dead bodies? Can you say morbid? This bitch seems to be one tough notch shell, I would have hate to meet her in her child hood. Lol. But seriously, you make her seem so very cold hearted, and also such a terrifying character. I like what your doing with The Tracker.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 10/20/12 . chapter 3
I noticed a spelling error, you may want to fix that if you wish, it was only a samll little a that didn't need to be there, and also I like how you describe how the character looks at all things around her, even the small aspects, like how gravity was what brought the tracker down, and also I like how she is this mysterious badass chick. She reminds me for some reason of Selene from Underworld, I don't know why? Anyways, she is like all badass's out their, just someone who just wants to have another human being their to cheer them on no matter how many times they tell them to blow off. That, and like all others, she just wants to get laid after a long yeah, I am liking this chick, she seems pretty cool despite her being a villain, I think I spelled that right. Anyways, I will read and review the next chapter.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 10/20/12 . chapter 2
I like the way you are writing your OC, if by any chance you don't mind, can you share with me exactly how to write the way you do? I like this kind of writing, and I feel as if my story is lacking it. I am not asking you to read my story, that is up to you. I am just asking how to write as good as this? Please do share?