|Reviews for Gerry's diary|
| CountryMustBeCountryWide 11/5/11 . chapter 1
I'm really interested to see where you go with this. I think it could be AMAZING. I'd really like to know what he actually wrote on some pages. I think you should continue writing it :D
| ItsRafaelbm 10/10/11 . chapter 1
Hey, very nice text! I loved really, but one sentence that I will change using the progressive form will be that one:
"she started to laugh about things Gerry wrote", like "She started laughing about the things Gerry wrote".
Thank you dear!
| Camila Almeida 10/10/11 . chapter 1
Very nice story, you are so creative!
| feandrioli 10/10/11 . chapter 1
Nice story! You can add any end, this story is always going to be beautiful, I really liked it.
Here are some grammar points that I think you should correct:
You wrote: She got curious to see what is writing inside of it. I think it should be "what was written".
You wrote It was Gerry diary and it should be "Gerry's diary".
You wrote: how did they met each other and it should be "how they met each other", since it's not a question.
The story is great! :)