OMG a cliff hanger! suspense! Please update soon!

i love it, great chapter )

Wonder what's going to happen to Cream now? I loved this chapter. Keep up the great work!

This is simply amazing in every level, heck you even shift perspectives and used the I in it. Heck... Do you think I should start using it in my fanfics?

I really enjoy this story can you please continue cause i absolutely love it! :D and i wonder when shadow is going to be in it?

this is so emotionless... I like to much your writing form )

Nice prologue...

very good )

This is just getting better and better.

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Excellent!