I like it. Keep going.

yay! a nuddah one!

HAZZAGRIFF

they're adorable. write a sequel/new chapter!

~sorry, ignore this review~

AHHH!!! That was soooooooooo good...I wanna read more more more...now :) The first few paragraghs were real deep with emotional and it made ya really feel for the character. You really got the touch to have sympathic character peronalities. It was brillant!

ah... i like it. i have no more to say. good use of dialect. i can't do that for the life of me. *shrug*