Ya know, you were really close with Truls Marius Redwood. You can spell "I am lord" just not voldemort. Too bad.

i enjoyed the story... but not half as much as harry and sev did ;) mhwahahahahaha

What-?

...where the heck is Peter? and why is Lily suddenly part of the Marauder?

...I'm really... really... confused.

oh my gosh, i love this, its so sweet and funny and there's sex too!

Keep on Writing

-Siph

Very amusing.

OH yes this was well worth the read. Loved it. Was tho cornall dumbledoor or someone als?

Brilliant, seriously brilliant. I loved this story.

Thank you, you have made my day/morning

Alys x

I really enjoyed it! But if Harry looks so much like his dad, why didn't anyone notice their similarity to each other?

A wonderful story, I wonder if there is going to be more. Nice job. _

I liked it, it was simple, short, and sweet!

soul meets soul when eye meets eye. I would know that saying anywhere! ElfQuest, gotta love it. good story as well.

Very enjoyable. xD

I for one loved this story. Although I think some words were missing and you made quite a few homophone mistakes. But no worries, I still liked it.

I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing it with me.

Timeline problem: Auror's and Fudge were holding on to things as not to fall to the floor

'tis not "fudge" yet

that was sooo good. do i hear a sequel?