This is what mastery poetry sounds like people! If I didn't live it,I would tell you. But I loved every line ,stanza, just everything...it was truly and utterly great.

Hardcore : :

That was amazing! When I read a preticularly good story, I get this little heavy place in my chest that aches for the main characters losses, and I got that with this story. You are an amazing writer. Good luck!

Wow. That was so amazingly wonderful! And beautiful writing! Just wow. Loved it with an insanely burning passion! Fantastic!

O M G! Totally awesome! I luved it!