Wonderful insight into Olive's perspective. I get so excited when there's a new Blue Castle fanfiction. Yayaya!

This is quite an accurate portrayal of Cousin Olive and how her later reactions to her cousins's new found life and status would be. Jealously turned to curiosity. It is nice to think of them mending their past differences and that Barney still takes her family and her "their" hometown into consideration after so much about their way of life has changed. Excellent writing.

This was a delight to read! Your depiction of Barney, as brief as it is, was especially strong. I hope you write more for this fandom! :D

Sweet! Very hopeful too ;)

You write these characters so well you should write one about Barney's thoughts during the book... My dream fanfic!

Great work!

I really liked this piece! Great addition to the end of the book. :)