I normally skip reading poems in this genre, but since you're one of my favorite authors, I gave it a try, and I really liked your stuff.

The song is lovely, though the second poem is definitely my favorite.

The only thing I didnt like was the f word besides that I loved it.

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But titles whose pov it is.

AnimeFreakSlayer

I liked it, mostly because I'm not much of a poem person, so I make myself feel better by reading other peoples'. Well, I guess you can tell by now I liked it.

WOW! im speachless! those where awesome!

Nice job! The second and third poems were my favorites - They're unique and well written enough to stand on their own, not just as Inu-fanpoetry (although I loved the Sess allusions in the third!).

Well written-even if I couldn't figure out the last one. My fault, though, not yours. :o)

Oh, I like!

Don't worry about Kagome's poem, i actually think it's my favorite.

I like how you've done poetry, normally isn't my thing cause I get confused so easily, but I liked this.

You have my support if you decide to write more, for I think it's well placed.

that was cute!

Pretttyyyyy! I've never really tried my paws at writing poetry, but those were very very very good! I liked the bit of humor stuck in the second one, and I loved how the last stanza's last line in the second poem was sliiighty different than the last line of the second-to-last stanza. Very kewl!

oh...beautiful. very, very well done.

no critiques - i loved them all.

hey,

i think your insights on the relationships between inuyasha and kagome are well done, especially the last poem. the only thing that i can think of to suggest is perhaps gonig through your songs with a thesaurus at your side - please take this in the best way, i really like your stuff, but i think it would be more powerful with different wording. i'd be really grateful if you looked over my story and helped me out there :)

bravo!

esfwolf

These were really, really good.

Last verse, last phrase: the spaces... in between...

Last verse, 4th phrase: and, oh, could you help me kill... the faces in between...

Otherwise, it's perfect.

You coul clear up who the first poem is about, and it was kind of confusing, but still pretty good. On a happier note, your poetry is better than mine, and I plan to be a famous writer.