|Reviews for When The Hero Falls|
| Msteine23 3/31/13 . chapter 14
I Love this story. I miss this show so much it was one of the best shows on USA. Keep Going
| BrittanyLS 3/8/13 . chapter 14
I love that Mary is there for him!
| jekkah 2/24/13 . chapter 14
"You said, he knows I love him despite everything…There's no despite." He corrected. - I adore this line
Poor Marshall. He's just breaking my heart. Love that he was worried that Mary might not be there to take care of him.
| JJ2008 2/5/13 . chapter 14
Thanks for the update! Poor Marshall, but loved that he wanted Mary to stay...please update soon.
| JMS529 2/5/13 . chapter 14
Like Seth willing to give up his career to help Marshall. It shows more than he's been able to say to his son. Actions do speak louder then words. Felt bad for Stan being unsure of how to act around Marshall. Have a feeling Eleanor will help him out. The ending was sweet with Marshall wanting Mary to help and her promising to be there. Looking forward to the next part.
| jekkah 11/19/12 . chapter 13
Peace out, Raph. I never like you as much as I do when you're walking away.
AWWWWWWWWW: "I hope he's worth all this."
"He is." Mary insisted. "It's the one thing I am sure of."
Love the Rachel/Mary talk.
It's hard to read Marshall like that. He has a lot of recovering to do.
Double-awwwwww: "Well, you're the most beautiful thing, I've ever seen."
| JJ2008 11/19/12 . chapter 13
Great chapter! Glad Mary admitted her feelings to Ralph...looking forward to the next chapter:)
| BrittanyLS 11/18/12 . chapter 13
Glad Mary has less to worry about with Raph knowing how she feels!
| JMS529 11/16/12 . chapter 13
Glad Mary admitted her feeling to Raph and telling Marshall's mom. Liked Marshall's cheat sheet and how he remembered Mary. Looking forward to the next part.
| BrittanyLS 10/23/12 . chapter 12
Wow, what a place to end the chapter! I was thrilled for Mary, and then it ends! Please update soon!
| JJ2008 10/22/12 . chapter 12
Go Shelley! Loved how she made Mary think. So sweet that Marshall was agitated that Mary was not there with him:). Anxiously awaiting more, please update soon.
| jekkah 10/21/12 . chapter 12
SHELLEY! I love, adore Shelley! She should be in all fics! (except mine 'cause I can't write that smart)
The conversation between Mary and Shelley was fantastic, especially when they were discussing whether or not Mary loves Marshall and why she can't find out if she does. That's a get insight into Mary that I haven't seen around here.
And of course, I love that Marshall needed Mary whether or not he remembers her. Awwwww!
| JMS529 10/19/12 . chapter 12
I so like Shelley and Mary's conversation and how Shelley tells her they both know how she feels. Love that Marshall was looking for Mary and his parents had to stress it to get her to realize what they were saying. Looking forward to the next part.
| jekkah 9/20/12 . chapter 11
Ooh, Seth being the one to calm Marshall down is all kinds of awesome! I like that little twist.
Oh, that last paragraph is a killer! I just wanna hug Mary.
| JJ2008 9/18/12 . chapter 11
Excellent! Loved Mary's keepsakes and how Marshall looked to his father for comfort. Can't wait for more, please update soon!